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Vivio Takamachi - Vivio Takamachi - 09-25-2014
Character name: Vivio Takamachi
Character source: Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha
Character history: Post force Manga After Nanoha Disappeared.
Physical Description: (originals only)
Stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 3
SPD: 2
TEC: 2
Starting Proficiencies: Physical Strength(1,000), Ranged(1,000), Area Shield(400), Area Attack(600)
Starting Powers: Burst Movement(800)
Starting Moves: Accel smash: An High speed Uppercut used by Vivio. Usually used as a counterattack just after Vivio blocks or dodges an opponents attack. She can also use it to knock Projectiles away if she hits at the right moment.(300 OM, Physical Strength Proficiency required.),
Sonic Shooter: A high speed shooting spell that Vivio uses. She can shoot a single bolt or Up to 30 with it's Variation: Sonic Shooter Assault shift. The Bolts appear all at once and fire. When moving around She can control the bolts to fire one after the other like a machine gun for suppressive fire and cover fire, as well as using them to repel other projectiles. It can drain quite a bit of her energy due to how powerful it is.(600 OM, Range Proficiency and Area Attack Proficiency required.),
Divine Buster: Vivio's Mother Nanoha Takamachi's most infamous attack. It consists of a large beam of energy launched from the caster That can inflict heavy damage. The spell itself can only be cast while stationary and requires manual aiming up until the beam is released. Vivio's version has a short charge time of 4-5 seconds and can be shot mid to close range.(300 OM, Range Proficiency and Area Attack Proficiency required)
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Re: Vivio Takamachi - Omni - 09-25-2014
You need to write descriptions for your moves. See Moves.
Re: Vivio Takamachi - Omni - 09-25-2014
Ahoy thar! For the following moves, please edit the descriptions to include the requested details. Once you've added those required details and it looks satisfactory I will price/approve them. Looking over them, you only have one move that requires additional details. However, additional details such as the hue and appearance of her energy attacks would be appreciated.
Quote:Starting Moves: Accel smash: An High speed Uppercut used by Vivio. Usually used as a counterattack just after Vivio blocks or dodges an opponents attack. She can also use it to knock Projectiles away if she hits at the right moment.(300 OM, Physical Strength Proficiency required.),Approved at 300.
Granted that this is currently a simple move at 300 OM. If you wish to charge up the uppercut to make it more powerful or other such variations, you'd need to upgrade the move to a 600 OM or more move.
Quote:Sonic Shooter: A high speed shooting spell that Vivio uses. She can shoot a single bolt or multiple with it's Variation: Sonic Shooter Assault shift. With Assault Shift she can control up to 30 bolts. She can move around while controlling the bolts for suppressive fire and cover fire, as well as using them to repel other projectiles.(600 OM, Range Proficiency and Area Attack Proficiency required.)Not sure what this means with 'control up to 30 bolts'? Do they fire one at a time like a machine gun, or a bunch of bolts appearing at once and firing all at once? Should be fine but needs to be a little clearer before I can approve it.
Quote:Divine Buster: Vivio's Mother Nanoha Takamachi's most infamous attack. It consists of a large beam of energy launched from the caster That can inflict heavy damage. The spell itself can only be cast while stationary and requires manual aiming up until the beam is released. Vivio's version has a short charge time of 4-5 seconds and can be shot mid to close range.(300 OM, Range Proficiency and Area Attack Proficiency required)Approved at 300.
Re: Vivio Takamachi - Omni - 09-25-2014
Vivio Takamachi Wrote:Sonic Shooter: A high speed shooting spell that Vivio uses. She can shoot a single bolt or multiple with it's Variation: Sonic Shooter Assault shift. The Bolts appear all at once and fire. When moving around She can control the bolts to fire one after the other like a machine gun for suppressive fire and cover fire, as well as using them to repel other projectiles.(600 OM, Range Proficiency and Area Attack Proficiency required.)For clarification, include something like "she may summon a single bolt, or up to 30 bolts all at once. They materialise around her in a small circle before firing at the target".
You might also want to include something like "this attack drains a fair amount of energy" as it seems like quite a powerful attack. Optional! I'm not sure how powerful this move is meant to be.
Re: Vivio Takamachi - Vivio Takamachi - 09-25-2014
I've edited as requested.
Re: Vivio Takamachi - Omni - 09-25-2014
Alright, thank you for being patient! And welcome officially. Here's your roster. Please cut and paste it to a new topic entitled 'Vivio Takamachi' in the roster forum. Please also add your move descriptions in a reply to this topic, and any other information you wish to add such as appearance, personality, history (you can edit this information in later if you prefer, but preferably before roleplaying with any groups). You can start roleplaying whenever. Please check out this.
Name: Vivio Takamachi
Level: 1
Spent OM: 5000
Proficiencies: (3000); Physical Strength (1000), Ranged (1000), Area Shield (400), Area Attack (600)
Powers: (800); Burst Movement (800)
Moves: (1200); Accel Smash (300), Sonic Shooter (600), Divine Buster (300)
Super Moves:
Transformations:
Summons:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 3
SPD: 2
TEC: 2