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Your Last Sentence - Caira Ayryn - 05-03-2016
Borrowed this from a post I saw from a writing page- write the sentence you last wrote/edited (either on the OV or not) if it's a small sentence, feel free to simply copy a paragraph to explain/lead into it.
RE: Your Last Sentence - Alex - 05-03-2016
“Are you not entertained?” Argento boomed as his body shined with the might of the sun.
RE: Your Last Sentence - Gamzee Makara - 05-03-2016
“Get on with it.”
“Right, my badness. Well, what’s all kinds of fucked up from sun down, is that it felt good. It felt so motherfucking righteous to have that big ass stage curtain fly off of my shoulders. It felt like the greatest show on earth was about to begin and I was the centerpiece and I was gonna-”
“Got it.”
“Yeah. Well, long story short I liked that power. That rage, coursing through my lifeblood. I can’t like it though, I’ll fucking lose it if I like it. Trade in one addiction for another, ya dig? I just can’t win, Strawso.”
“It’s Strazio.”
“Right.”
RE: Your Last Sentence - Mark - 05-03-2016
“Shelke...” he rasped, his vision blurring. His eyes blinked slowly, futilely, as he drifted away.
RE: Your Last Sentence - Omni - 05-03-2016
Their blood trickled into the fountain and it blossomed red, framed against the twinkling light of omnilium that floated upwards from the primes’ fallen forms.
RE: Your Last Sentence - Dave Strider - 05-03-2016
There was gonna be some shenanigans of the hellish degree.
RE: Your Last Sentence - Okor - 05-03-2016
"How in the hell are you still alive?”
Through a mouthful of shattered teeth and blood, Okor spoke the truth.
”Force of... habit.”
RE: Your Last Sentence - Caira Ayryn - 05-03-2016
Oh my god these are all REALLY good
RE: Your Last Sentence - Dr. McNinja - 05-03-2016
"The key that King Radical has," Dracula continued, "leads to an Artefact."
I'm gonna cheat though and post my favorite post ending:
Doc looked up.
There was a thick fog everywhere.
"Oh no."
The swamp started bubbling even more.
"Oh come on."
RE: Your Last Sentence - Paul Atreides - 05-03-2016
“Duncan. Gurney. We are headed to Carrefore. Prepare to ride.”
“Never liked those Worms...” Duncan said with an uneasy look back over his shoulder at the guards.
(Context: Paul rides massive sand worms that scare the shit out of Duncan... and most people in their right minds)
RE: Your Last Sentence - Harry Dresden - 05-03-2016
PFFFFFFFFFFF this is gonna sound so bad out of context but
I must wait for one of you to weaken before I pounce, then assume your skin as a disguise and assimilate into the group.
RE: Your Last Sentence - Jak Mar - 05-03-2016
Depends on who dies.
Daxter dying- .... *coughs up blood* Jak. JAKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK....
Jak holds Daxter in fists of a twisted sense of crying and pain and rage, trying to heal the ottsel. "Dax...Dax... Shit.. hold on man, you'll live please...
RE: Your Last Sentence - Tartaros - 05-03-2016
"They may never return home again, they may be forgotten, but their actions will echo through eternity. For every one of them that fell, there would be retribution tenfold, tithed in the blood of traitors. Let the false gods laugh, they won’t be laughing for long."
this is actually from a WIP post but whatever
RE: Your Last Sentence - Granite - 05-09-2016
Cool! That's just the kind of cool, unique design! Keep them rolling in!
(in fact, I'll give you a link to the page that contains it! http://omegaupdate.freeforums.net/thread/238/ties-sanity-5-fourth-sight)
RE: Your Last Sentence - Mickey Mouse - 05-10-2016
"Mireya scowled. She just knew something was about to go terribly wrong."
RE: Your Last Sentence - The Humble Sage - 05-11-2016
"At least he wouldn’t bleed out now."
Things are going smoothly. *cough* I don't know what you're talking about.
RE: Your Last Sentence - Trixie - 05-12-2016
When I die, stay away from my funeral.
RE: Your Last Sentence - Doomguy - 05-12-2016
"So what's your name?" I asked about as nonchalantly as I could muster. Despite my reputation as a bit of a brick, I can still be social. But it wasn't enough to fly over her head.
"What's yours?" She countered
"Doomguy" I answered instantly by reflex
"Then you can call me Captain. If you're trying this trust thing, 'Doomguy", then you're failing miserably"
RE: Your Last Sentence - Jade Harley - 05-15-2016
"“Meowrrrrr…” Phyllis replied, with that sexy alley cat brogue of hers that really wasn’t pleasant at all. That’s what you get for being banished to a planet filled with psychotic mutant worms only capable of speaking in the Felinis tongue.
Hatchenson scratched the side of his nose. “Er, what?” Perhaps he had misunderstood.
Sounding even more hissy than before, Phyllis answered. “MEEOWWwrrr!”"
Alternatively, this one, because I really like it:
[spoiler]The planet Dernetto is relatively isolated from other planets that might offer potential trading pacts. It is also inhabited by several species of underwater fauna, and only one of which has dared to venture out across the coarse grey sands.
These creatures are humanoid, with hairstyles that hold a striking similarity to porcupines. They are known for their prickly attitudes and love for all things organic. Because of this, it is considered prime territory to the Alternian Empire, especially to the seadwellers who dominate most of the upper spectrum. The empire holds plenty of planets that produce exports of interest to the inhabitants of Dernetto, and so it is good for economical profit.
Currently, scientist Kanaya Maryam of Alternia is taking samples from one of Dernetto's four large seas that span much of the globe. It is yellowish in color, almost with a urine-like quality. It might also be mistaken for apple juice. Bold limestone cliffs cut an imposing figure agains the sulfurous yellow sky, smeared with long strectches of halfway-evaporated blue. She raises a vial full of burnt orange liquid to examine.
"Oh my God," a deadpan voice from nearby says. "That's pee. This is totally an ocean of pee. Did you see that, Rose? Your hot alien girlfriend has a job where she has to handle pee, on a piss planet."
A much more elegant voice speaks, but there is an enticing hint of good humor behind it. "David, I am fairly certain that Kanaya wouldn't deal in something so crude. Isn't that right, Kanaya?"
"No," Kanaya replies. "This is, as Dave has said, urine."
Silence falls for a moment, and a breeze rifles through Kanaya's dark hair, encircling her horns briefly before departing. The ocean laps against the sides of the metal boat below them.
"What," Rose Lalonde says.[/spoiler]