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Weiss Vs Sans for the survival of the underground - Weiss Deathwind - 04-20-2016 Because We''ll never get the opportunity to do it in Omniverse canon, so why not? This is for OOC discussion(and judge hunting) of our fight thread, and to set down parameters. Mock fight: Weiss Vs. Sans Rounds: 3 Words: 800 Arena: Hall of Judgement [spoiler][/spoiler] Judge: still looking! RE: Weiss Vs Sans for the survival of the underground - Harry Dresden - 04-20-2016 I was gonna read the heck out of this, I can judge RE: Weiss Vs Sans for the survival of the underground - Weiss Deathwind - 04-20-2016 I'd love to have you as a judge! If sans is okay with it I'd have no problem with you judging RE: Weiss Vs Sans for the survival of the underground - Sans - 04-20-2016 Why the heck not?! RE: Weiss Vs Sans for the survival of the underground - Sans - 04-20-2016 Intro. Is. Posted. Transformation. Used. 1 out of 2 SP remaining. May the Battle. Commence. RE: Weiss Vs Sans for the survival of the underground - Sans - 04-27-2016 Annnnnnnd posted. Round 1 post done! RE: Weiss Vs Sans for the survival of the underground - Sans - 05-09-2016 Gonna bump this just so Weiss doesn't forget RE: Weiss Vs Sans for the survival of the underground - Sans - 05-30-2016 Posted my Round 2 Post! RE: Weiss Vs Sans for the survival of the underground - Sans - 06-09-2016 Round 3 Complete! The mock fight is now ready for judging! RE: Weiss Vs Sans for the survival of the underground - Sans - 06-13-2016 Bumping. Want to see if anyone else is willing to judge if Harry Dresden is unavailable. RE: Weiss Vs Sans for the survival of the underground - Sans - 06-20-2016 Bump! Bump! RE: Weiss Vs Sans for the survival of the underground - Corporal Light - 07-06-2016 Still need a judge http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=5507 <-- Link to fight thread. RE: Weiss Vs Sans for the survival of the underground - Sans - 07-19-2016 Still need a judge! xD Link to the fight thread is in the previous post. RE: Weiss Vs Sans for the survival of the underground - Kaylee - 07-19-2016 I judge the thingie thing. Expect me to take awhile because of my dyslexia and ADHD, other than that, I will get it up by Thursday night. RE: Weiss Vs Sans for the survival of the underground - Crocodile - 08-29-2016 I'll read over this during work, as time allows, and give a verdict once I get home. RE: Weiss Vs Sans for the survival of the underground - Crocodile - 08-30-2016 Weiss: You MAY be overusing ellipses. Granted, some of it came from Sans' speech, so those I can overlook, but I AM seeing a lot of them and it's a bit distracting from the story. Seeing some minor spelling and capitalization errors here and there. Nothing major, but these are things that could be avoided via a Wordcheck. In a few places, I felt like you could have worded things differently to improve the mental image you were hoping to project, but once again it was minor. All that said, you had excellent imagery in your writing and your motives came through clearly. You clearly paid attention to your opponent's stats in comparison to your own. You toughed out his speedy, but weak, attacks and had trouble hitting him. A particular strength you showed was in your internal turmoil. Sans: I'm not seeing a lot of wordage variety in this post. Not a bad thing, but thinking you might look to including some synonyms in your writing. If you used "girl" in one sentence, perhaps "opponent" would have been better in the second. Like Weiss, I'm catching some mispellings here and there, but nothing too major. As with Weiss, you had excellent imagery and motivation. I felt like it came through a bit more clearly in your writing than in hers, particularly in describing the arena you were in. Both: Neither of you went over your word-count, so yay! Ok, so this is how I grade. Enjoyability: (1-10) Did I like what I was reading, or did I end up skimming? How much did you engage me? Did you have a lot of mispellings or grammar errors which made it hard to read? Penalties0-Whatever) Did you go over wordcount or miss a deadline? Pretty much the only things I look for in regards to this category. -1 point for every infraction. SP: Every SP you spend during the fight gives you 1 point in this category. So, here are my grades. Weiss Enjoyability: 8 Penalties: 0 SP: 2 Total: 10 Sans Enjoyability: 8 Penalties: 0 SP: 1 (Sorry, you used the first SP in the Intro Post. I only include SP you spend during the Combat Posts, even if the effects of the spent SP go into the Combat itself.) Total: 9 Weiss is the victor, in my opinion. That said, it was extremely close and if not for the SP category, it'd probably have been a draw. I dunno if Staff give rewards for these OOC fights, but if they do, I'd recommend granting 200 OM to Weiss and 100 to Sans, with Weiss getting the extra as a "victor's" prize.