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White Abyss (Feedback) - Deadpool - 07-18-2014
So, I've finished my first thread with Deathstroke. It would be awesome if I could get some firm (but still constructive) criticism.
It's been years since I've written anything, let alone anything of substance.
But anyway, the link is below.
http://omniverse-rpg.com/viewtopic.php?f=12&t=936