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Mako Mankanshoku - Mako - 03-07-2015 Character Change: Eudocia->Mako Mankanshoku Character name: Mako Mankanshoku Character source: Kill la Kill Character history: Mako lives in the slums with her family and goes to Honnoji Academy as a no-star. No-stars are normal students that get no privileges from Honnoji Academy. There is a ranking system in the academy going from No-stars to Three-stars. Only a select few become three stars and only club presidents get to become two stars. Mako had soon befriended the new transfer student Ryuko. After Ryuko assaulted the student council president Satsuki Kiryuin. Mako had been captured since she was seen socializing with Ryuko. Ryuko came and saved Mako from the disciplinary council. Mako had offered Ryuko to stay at her family's as thanks for saving her. Ryuko had warmed up to Mako and they began to deepen their friendship. Ryuko had declared that she would take down the student council president which in turned gotten her aimed after by all the school's clubs. Soon Ryuko had decided to Mako that they should make a fight club so it would be easier for Ryuko to defeat the clubs. Due to their success their club become more well known and they had gotten rewards for doing their activities. Mako's family became richer and they moved out the slums. Mako had thought that her family was better off this way. The student council president had saw this and decided to offer Mako a even better living for her family if she dons the Two-star Goku uniform and defeats Ryuko. Mako had fought with Ryuko, holding back her strength. Ryuko had decided not to fight her friend. This had made Mako realize that her way of thinking was wrong and she had to stop fighting Ryuko or else she could very well die. After Mako and her family apologized to Ryuko and Ryuko destroyed the Two-star Goku uniform that Mako wore they went back home. Later that night when Mako was sleeping she found herself being plucked off to be sent to the Omniverse. Physical Description: Mako is a young teenage girl with light brown eyes. She has light brown hair styled in a bowl cut. Mako stands at 5'3" with a lithe physique. She usually wears Honnōji Academy No-Star uniform. Completed with a white short sleeve shirt with a blue neckerchief and a blue mini skirt. [spoiler][/spoiler] Stats: ATK: 3 DEF: 5 SPD: 1 TEC: 1 Starting Proficiencies:(2,000) Physical Strength: 1000, Ranged Proficiency: 1000 Starting Powers:(3,400) Advanced Regeneration: 1800, Burst Movement: 800, Master Super Jumping: 800 Starting Moves: (1,200) Two-Star Goku Uniform(Requires Advanced Regeneration, Physical Strength-300 Om): Mako summons her old Goku uniform for combat. As her club was the "Fighting Club", the Goku Uniform is designed after a Bancho, and consisted of a black over coat hung over her shoulders. It had two red four-pointed stars to symbolize its rank on her belt. The coat was studded with gold metals around the collar and had red spikes from the shoulders. She also wore a black cap with a golden crescent moon on it. She had red spiked cuffs on her wrists and golden brass knuckles engraved with the word "MAKO". Inside the coat are several golden weapons such as a morning-star and a wrench. She also had a green reed in her mouth. On her feet she wears Geta. The Geta have red spikes coming from the soles of them. [spoiler][/spoiler] Golden Bat(Requires Physical Strength, Two-Star Goku Uniform-300): Mako summons a golden bat in her hands. The bat is wrapped in bandages at the top of the bat and near the handle. Golden nails are stabbed into the bat over the bandages. She primarily uses the bat with her left hand since her right hand has golden brass knuckles on them. Mako Punch!(Requires Physical Strength, Two-Star Goku Uniform-300): Mako pulls back her punch for a charge. Mako's muscles in her right arm visibly tenses up which indicates she's about to throw a punch. Mako holds her punch back for a at least two seconds and then hits her target. She then punches outward with her right hand and her punch is twice as strong as one of her regular punches. Mako Weapon Barrage!(Requires Ranged Proficiency, Two-Star Goku Uniform-300): Inside her Goku uniform she has a five golden weapons. Mako sends a barrage of weapons from the inside of her uniform to the person. The weapons consist of the weapons found inside her coat. The barrage in total has fifty weapons, after the fifty weapons come from her coat the barrage stops. Somehow even though there are five weapons in her coat ten of each weapon comes out of the coat. When the barrage is over the weapons are gone from her coat. Every five seconds a golden weapon appears back in her coat. When twenty-five seconds pass and all the weapons are in place she can activate this move again. Even if she un-summons her Goku Uniform and twenty-five seconds haven't past then the weapons will still be gone. The weapon barrage goes up to twenty meters outward before they actually start to suffer from the distance and lose their speed and power. I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct. Confirmed. Re: Mako Mankanshoku - Proto Man - 03-07-2015 Goku Uniform - This sounds mostly cosmetic? Does it actually function as full-body armor? What weapons are associated with this? Golden Bat - This seems fine. Mako Cheer - I don't think that we allow free stats with Buff Proficiency, otherwise it'd be a whole of a heck more expensive than 400 OM Make Punch - This also seems fine. Re: Mako Mankanshoku - Mako - 03-07-2015 Updated. Taken the armor part out of the Goku uniform and added a move as well as bought Ranged. Re: Mako Mankanshoku - Proto Man - 03-07-2015 I don't believe that you have a move that sends a barrage of random weapons at people. If I recall Omni's past rulings on things like that, it can only be a specific type of thing if you do it en masse. So I'm not going to approve the move and have you move it to Move Approval thread and direct Omni there. Other than that, the rest looks good. Since I doubt you don't need this move from the get-go, I'm going to approve you. You'll have to wait a short while for the name change. Name: Mako Mankanshoku Level: 1 Spent OM: 6300 Proficiencies (2000): Physical Strength (1000), Ranged (1000) Powers (3400): Advanced Regeneration (1800), Master Super Jumping (800), Burst Movement (800) Moves (900): Goku Uniform (300), Golden Bat (300), Mako Punch (300) Super Moves: Transformations: Assists: Items: Bases: Unlocks: Base stats: ATK: 3 DEF: 5 SPD: 1 TEC: 1