(07-06-2017, 08:02 AM)Dr. Doom Wrote:

(07-05-2017, 04:01 PM)Omni Wrote:

(07-05-2017, 11:21 AM)Dr. Doom Wrote: Ranged Proficiency: (300) 

Mask of Doom
Dr. Doom can fire green mystical energy from the eye slits of his mask. It takes 2 seconds to fire from his eyes. The width and height of the blast of energy is about two inches. The energy can reach up to 45 feet and the energy can pick speed to around 50 miles per hour. Over use of the move will force Doom to rest his magic for about 20 seconds.

So it's ... two blasts, right? Or do they form together into one blast?

Yes it is two blast that come out of his eye slits in his mask.

(06-29-2017, 07:27 AM)Repliku Wrote: Black Heart - (600, Ranged Proficiency, Physical Strength Proficiency.)



A key blade that was created out of the Darkness from within Repliku's Heart. The Key-Blade can also be used as a sword, or as a ranged weapon. This blade has a length of about 22 inches long, and a width of about 10 inches. The blade can be summoned in a flash of darkness by Repliku. This key blade can be swung incredibly fast by Repliku and is usually meant to be wielded one-handed, leaving his hand free for another weapon, or move. This is moderately tiring for Repliku to use. The way it can be used by itself as a ranged weapon is by being "thrown" at an opponent, usually aimed at the head and then being teleported back to Repliku's hand, as once it leaves his hand it can only be gone a few seconds before it will rematerialize in his hands. This has a maximum range of 75 feet, at present. This can be thrown 2 seconds after it is successfully summoned. This travels at speeds of 30 MPH.

The key blade can also "lock" people's hearts, preventing the formation of a Heartless or Nobody should they be consumed by the Heartless. It can also release the Heart from a Heartless, returning the heart to the Nobody that was created when the Heart was consumed, turning them back into themselves.

Furthermore, this can act as an "All Access Pass" for Repliku when he has access to a base of his own, able to be used as a key to well.. anything he owns.

Lastly, the Key Blade can only be wielded by Repliku unless he performs an "Inheritance Ceremony" that he doesn't remember how to do with ones he deems worthy of the Key Blade. Granted they'd have to buy their own version, but still.


Cut down the Staff of the Dark Mage to a single spell for now.
The staff of the Dark Mage (900, Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency, Physical Strength Proficiency):



The staff of the dark mage is made out of a blackened wood that is as strong as Iron, thus allowing it to withstand clashing with most weapons. It can be used to physically assault an opponent, or it can be used in the way it was designed for, namely for magical assaults against an enemy. This comes with a few pre-recorded spells inside of it that can be cast by the Staff itself. This staff is about 20 inches long.  It's got two red gemstones in it that act as the primary focus points of magic.

 - Lightning:  This uses the Debuff Proficiency.  Holding the staff aloft, Repliku will yell out "Lightning" and a single lightning bolt will come down at an opponent within a range of 35 feet of him and strike them, making it harder for them to hold weapons for seven seconds because their nervous system will feel like it's on fire. This also uses the Ranged Proficiency. There is, however, another use of the Lightning Spell that can be done, namely charging the staff with an electrical current, so that it can be swung and do the same amount of damage Lightning does, but with a melee component. Lightning does Medium Damage on an opponent. This cannot be used with other moves, except those that use the Staff of the Dark Mage. The Lightning attack comes straight down, and cannot change direction, or home. It can be blocked easily. Furthermore, the shock effect debuff only applies to those who use weapons that have a composition of metal entirely and must be conductive. The Lightning comes straight down from the sky at an opponent, thanks to the Ranged Materialize Proficiency that Repliku has. The Shock Effect also has another caveat,  weapons that have magical properties or are sufficiently high tech would be unaffected by the shock effect of this spell.

Both variations of Lightning can be used while moving. Both of them are only powerful enough to deal Medium Damage to anyone who is hit by them, akin to getting zapped by a Tazer. Both require only 4 seconds to cast. The staff requires ten seconds of cool down before it can cast Lightning once more, in either fashion. Neither version requires any of Repliku's focus, other than raising the staff and saying "Lightning" in the case of the ranged version of the technique. The melee version requires both hands however.

(07-02-2017, 10:15 PM)Repliku Wrote: Adding a few more moves that I thought up.

Spell Channel - Fire (300, Debuff, Physical Strength):

Spell Channel Fire is an ability that allows Repliku to channel a Fire Spell into the blade Soul Eater. For RP purposes this causes the blade to be coated in black flames. This takes 3 seconds for him to charge up, and is moderately taxing on his stamina. It's instinctive, and as such doesn't require any level of concentration for him to use. What this does do is allow him to burn his opponents for six seconds per attack that is done when this is charged up. It can be used with other moves that don't require both hands. In addition, it can be used while moving as he has to get close enough to his opponent in order to slash them to make this attack work.

Spell Channel - Ice (300, Debuff, Physical Strength.):

Spell Channel Ice is an ability that allows Repliku to channel an Ice Spell into the blade Soul Eater. For RP purposes this causes the blade to be coated in dark blue ice. This takes 3 seconds for him to charge up, and is moderately taxing on his stamina. It's instinctive, and as such doesn't require any level of concentration for him to use. What this does do is allow him to freeze his opponents for six seconds per attack that is done when this is charged up. It can be used with other moves that don't require both hands. In addition, it can be used while moving as he has to get close enough to his opponent in order to slash them to make this attack work.

It doesn't work  (300, Insight, Master Acrobat):  

A move that allows Repliku to use a series of gymnastics moves, such as flips, spins and twists to avoid moves that are of his Tier level. In other words, it's a move that allows him to dodge regular moves that are headed his way. While he can only keep this up for about 20 seconds at a time, and he can't dodge attacks of a Stronger Prime this could still prove to be a useful ability for him to have in the long run.

(07-06-2017, 03:00 PM)Makoto Yuki Wrote: Lightning Gloves - (Physical Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency) - 600 OM

[spoiler]Durable black gloves that fit snugly, covering the whole hand. Akihiko Sanada's weapon of choice. Can be used to punch, slap, backhand, choke, and generally do anything you could do barehanded.

Over the years they've become saturated with Akihiko's fighting spirit, imbuing them with his Persona's lightning. By taking four seconds of deep concentration during which he can't move or cast, Makoto can coat the gloves in electricity, which moderately shocks on impact. This effect lasts for 15 seconds, and is tiring enough to only be used three times at most per fight. Five seconds of cooldown are necessary before applying a second time.

Opponents who receive five or more direct, undefended hits while the effect is active feel the effect of the constant electric discharge on their nervous system, decreasing their fine motor skills (decreases TEC). This effect lasts for ten seconds. The debuff itself doesn't cost any additional effort to apply, as long as the above condition is met.[/spoiler]

Also wondering if I could change this:
[spoiler]Zio: Revised - (Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency) - 600 OM

A yellow bolt of lightning two meters long and three centimeters in diameter, when thrown like a lance it discharges on contact, burning flesh (or equivalent) but can't stun. Can be loosed as quickly as Makoto can make a grasping motion with a free hand. When thrown has the approximate speed of a bullet, and can hit targets no farther than 60 meters away provided it's accurately aimed. Owing to its simplicity, it's not very powerful nor very taxing, and can be cast while moving around or using other moves.

It's possible to upgrade this spell by charging for up to two seconds, the resulting bolt is comparatively slower, and has a range limited to 20 meters. This version is more damaging, as signified by a brighter glow, but it's also more tiring, forces the user to only move at a crawl, and prevents them from using other moves until the charging, which can't be externally interrupted, is complete. The increased electric charge is enough to immobilize a targeted limb, stopping its movement entirely for one second, after which movement returns to normal over the course of three seconds.[/spoiler]
Into this:
[spoiler]Zio: Revised - (Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency) - 600 OM

A yellow bolt of lightning two meters long and three centimeters in diameter, when thrown like a lance it discharges on contact, burning flesh (or equivalent) but can't stun. Can be loosed as quickly as Makoto can make a grasping motion with a free hand. When thrown has the approximate speed of a bullet, and can hit targets no farther than 60 meters away provided it's accurately aimed. Owing to its simplicity, it's not very powerful nor very taxing, and can be cast while moving around or using other moves.

It's possible to upgrade this spell by charging for up to five seconds, the resulting bolt is comparatively slower, and has a range limited to 20 meters. This version is more damaging, as signified by a brighter glow, but it's also more tiring, forces the user to only move at a crawl, and prevents them from using other moves until the charging, which can't be externally interrupted, is complete. The increased electric charge is enough to immobilize a targeted limb, stopping its movement entirely for double the time used to charge the move.[/spoiler]

I realize it's a big mechanical change which would probably require selling the old move and buying the new one, if it's even approved.

Sorry for all the trouble  >_>

Quote:Zio: Revised - (Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency) - 600 OM

A yellow bolt of lightning two meters long and three centimeters in diameter, when thrown like a lance it discharges on contact, burning flesh (or equivalent) but can't stun. Can be loosed as quickly as Makoto can make a grasping motion with a free hand. When thrown has the approximate speed of a bullet, and can hit targets no farther than 60 meters away provided it's accurately aimed. Owing to its simplicity, it's not very powerful nor very taxing, and can be cast while moving around or using other moves.

It's possible to upgrade this spell by charging for up to five seconds, the resulting bolt is comparatively slower, and has a range limited to 20 meters. This version is more damaging, as signified by a brighter glow, but it's also more tiring, forces the user to only move at a crawl, and prevents them from using other moves until the charging is complete. Being attacked or restrained will cancel the charge and reset the needed time. The increased electric charge is enough to immobilize a targeted limb, stopping its movement entirely for double the time used to charge the move.

(07-05-2017, 03:43 PM)Clownpiece Wrote: [spoiler]First, an addition to Lampad’s Torch

Paranoia (Ranged, Area Attack, Debuff) (300): Clownpiece concentrates for 5 seconds, channeling her powers of madness, before sweeping her torch out in front of her. Enemies within 20 meters who see the lunatic glow have a seed of paranoia planted in them for 15 seconds. On its own, this paranoia is too weak to do anything, and has no effect unless Clownpiece backs it up with something to inspire that paranoia. For this, she uses one of the cantrips taught by Dane during Dante's Abyss, "Ping."
With a quick moment of concentration, and a sound of some sort to go with it (be it a whisper, snap, footstep, or whatever), Clownpiece can throw that noise at a relatively flat surface within 10 meters, copying the sound where the spell hits and bouncing it off in a straight line. This process is repeated up to five times, each quieter than the last, as long as there’s a surface within 10 meters of the last bounce, creating an echoing effect. There’s approximately a 1 second delay between each bounce. On its own, this spell does absolutely nothing except sound cool. To those under the effects of her paranoia, however, this is the sound of an approaching foe, a spirit whispering in their ear, an ally trying to get their attention. The sounds spawned by Ping steal away precious seconds of their attention, fray their nerves, and just in general mess with their sanity.
This spell combo is about as draining as the other applications of her torch. She’s capable of inspiring paranoia a few times during a fight, but must be careful about overexerting. The Ping portion, however, is incredibly easy to do, with almost no noticeable energy drain. It’s just a fun little party trick, after all.

Barrage: Stars and Stripes (Ranged, Area Attack) (600): 
Stars: Clownpiece attempts to limit where enemies can move with a barrage of star-shaped, magical bullets. After charging up for 2 seconds, a process she needs to remain still during, she sweeps her torch out in front of her and conjures a line of 10 approximately 1 meter diameter shining stars, glowing in vibrant blues, reds, and whites. These shoot forward and spread out in a vaguely semi-circular pattern, flying forward up to 30 meters in 3 seconds before fizzling out. Each individual star is incredibly weak, doing little permanent damage, but hurting like a taser shot. The attack isn’t meant for its damage, however, as the spread is useful for forcing an enemy onto the defense for a short bit at least. Though if someone happens to be standing right in front of her as she casts it, they could potentially eat the entire barrage at once. She prefers to cast it by sweeping her torch out in front of her like she does for a lot of moves, but this attack doesn't require it. Her hand can be empty, or she could do it with a normal stick, or whatever. It's a normal use of her own magic, the torch is just for flair.

Stripes: An attack that’s a bit more direct than the curtain of stars. Clownpiece concentrates for 2 seconds, targeting a single point within 50 meters of her, and then releases an array of two, 1 meter diameter glowing magic orbs into the air just above her head, on either side of her. After a second of silence, the orbs, which shine in a random color between red, white, and blue, unleash a laser blast directly towards that single point, intersecting at it and continuing on. The lasers glow in the same color as the parent orb, measure half a meter in diameter, and travel their distance in an instant, burning bright for one second before fizzling out. Unlike the stars, which merely sting, the stripes burn intensely, with a heat similar to that of her charged Hellfire, though concentrated in a small area. Due to the delay between summoning the orbs and the lasers being fired, Clownpiece must guess where her opponent’s going to be in a second, making it fairly difficult to land.
Both versions of the attack have a moderate energy drain to them, allowing her to use them a good few times in a fight before she wears herself out.

T1 Assist: Torchlit Fairy (1000): Clownpiece calls a fellow fairy to her aide, bathed in the light of her torch. The lunacy makes her stronger and much more frenetic than the average fairy, but doesn't leave much room for smarts. Since Clownpiece is a hell fairy, this ally is a hell fairy as well, and stands around the same height as Clownpiece, give or take a few inches. Additionally, she's capable of using Hellfire, as well as the star/stripe bullet barrages. Fairies tend to be pretty hard to order around, but Clownpiece has found a way around that in the form of riling them up and pointing them at an enemy.
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ATK: 2
DEF: 1
SPD: 2
TEC: 0[/spoiler]

(07-05-2017, 04:28 PM)Clownpiece Wrote: [spoiler]

(07-05-2017, 04:10 PM)Omni Wrote:

Quote:Barrage: Stars and Stripes (Ranged, Area Attack) (600): 
Stars: Clownpiece attempts to limit where enemies can move with a barrage of star-shaped, magical bullets. After charging up for 2 seconds, a process she needs to remain still during, she sweeps her torch out in front of her and conjures a line of 10 approximately 1 meter sized shining stars, glowing in vibrant blues, reds, and whites. These shoot forward and spread out in a vaguely semi-circular pattern, flying forward up to 30 meters in 3 seconds before fizzling out. Each individual star is incredibly weak, doing little permanent damage, but hurting like a taser shot. The attack isn’t meant for its damage, however, as the spread is useful for forcing an enemy onto the defense for a short bit at least. Though if someone happens to be standing right in front of her as she casts it, they could potentially eat the entire barrage at once.

I'd add a 'moderate' energy drain to this, similar to the original Lampad's Torch. Those stars are pretty massive (I'm assuming you mean 1 meter in diameter - please add). and there are ten of them. That's gonna be hard to dodge. How fast are they?

Quote:Stripes: An attack that’s a bit more direct than the curtain of stars. Clownpiece concentrates for 2 seconds, targeting a single point within 50 meters of her, and then releases an array of two, 1 meter diameter glowing magic orbs into the air just above her head, on either side of her. After a second of silence, the orbs, which shine in a random color between red, white, and blue, unleash a laser blast directly towards that single point, intersecting at it and continuing on. The lasers glow in the same color as the parent orb, measure half a meter in diameter, and travel their distance in an instant, burning bright for one second before fizzling out. Unlike the stars, which merely sting, the stripes burn intensely, with a heat similar to that of her charged Hellfire, though concentrated in a small area. Due to the delay between summoning the orbs and the lasers being fired, Clownpiece must guess where her opponent’s going to be in a second, making it fairly difficult to land.
Both versions of the attack have a moderate energy drain to them, allowing her to use them a good few times in a fight before she wears herself out.

Oh right. Moderate energy drain. Gotcha.

Approved.

Quote:T1 Assist: Torchlit Fairy (1000): Clownpiece calls a fellow fairy to her aide, bathed in the light of her torch. The lunacy makes her stronger and much more frenetic than the average fairy, but doesn't leave much room for smarts. Since Clownpiece is a hell fairy, this ally tends to be a hell fairy as well, and is capable of using Hellfire, as well as the star/stripe bullet barrages. Usually fairies tend to be pretty hard to order around, but Clownpiece has found a way around that in the form of riling them up and pointing them at an enemy.

ATK: 2
DEF: 1
SPD: 2
TEC: 0

How big's this fairy? The 'tends' to be a hell fairy is a bit worrying. What else could it be? Please define if so.

Stars: They travel 30 meters in 3 seconds so they move at about 10 m/s, or 22 mph. Also adjusted to specify they're 1 meter in diameter.

Fairy: At first I thought "well she could be a normal, non-edgy fairy" but then I realized that would lock her out of using the moves so I changed it so she only calls upon hell fairies. She's also about Clownpiece's height, give or take a few inches (so like ranging between 4'2" and 4'8"). Changes made in bold to the original post.[/spoiler]

(07-08-2017, 07:41 PM)Freeza Wrote: Fodder: Alien Mutant - 0 om

It is well known that Freeza can breathe in oxygen free climates such as space, or underwater. This is due to him being an alien with mixed genes. He can pretty much convert anything to oxygen, or simply does not require it to live.

(07-07-2017, 02:48 AM)Makoto Yuki Wrote: Whoops, I should've checked the rest of the move before posting >_>

Quote:Zio: Revised - (Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency) - 600 OM

A yellow bolt of lightning two meters long and three centimeters in diameter, when thrown like a lance it discharges on contact, burning flesh (or equivalent) but can't stun. Can be loosed as quickly as Makoto can make a grasping motion with a free hand. When thrown has the approximate speed of a bullet, and can hit targets no farther than 60 meters away provided it's accurately aimed. Owing to its simplicity, it's not very powerful nor very taxing, and can be cast while moving around or using other moves.

It's possible to upgrade this spell by charging for up to five seconds, the resulting bolt is comparatively slower, and has a range limited to 20 meters. This version is more damaging, as signified by a brighter glow, but it's also more tiring, forces the user to only move at a crawl, and prevents them from using other moves until the charging is complete. Being attacked or restrained will cancel the charge and reset the needed time. The increased electric charge is enough to immobilize a targeted limb, stopping its movement entirely for double the time used to charge the move.

Will this work? And just so I'm sure we're on the same page, I do have to sell the old version for half price and then buy the new one, correct?

Thanks for your help!

(07-07-2017, 09:17 AM)Strazio Rockwell Wrote: @Omni - I can live with that reasoning. I do have to ask, if I do more storylines with him and become more involved with the character would I be able to get the move? Kinda like unlocking a level of recognition with the big guy.

(07-09-2017, 03:45 PM)Repliku Wrote: As to my question about taking those moves back to the drawing board? Also, I've purchased both the Dark Mage Staff, and Black Heart.

(07-09-2017, 05:19 PM)Blink Wrote: I've never made a transformation/power-up before, so I might need to workshop this. Bear with me.

Telenergy Surge (Tier One Power-Up, 1000 OM)

Blink has learned how to focus her teleportation energy (telenergy) into a specific form. The emerald power forms a physical suit around her body for defense. While in this form, she can't use the energy to form weapons or shields as usual, but it does give her a boost to her actual portal-making ability, allowing her to teleport much faster to appear as if she is literally 'blinking' in and out of reality.

The telenergy is much more visible then usual while she is surging. It appears as a green aura around her body, even leaking out from her fingertips using creating portals.

ATK: 1
DEF: 2 + 2 = 4
SPD: 5 + 2 = 7
TEC: 2 + 1 = 3