Sasuke Uchiha Wrote:Explosive Tag
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[spoiler][/spoiler](Area Attack Proficiency, Remote Control Proficiency)(600 OM)
Also known as a paper bombs, they are scraps of paper inscribed with a special writing, centering around the kanji word for "explode" (爆, baku). Infused with chakra, they will explode after a set amount of time, remotely, or after being ignited by flame. The tags can be attached to a surface or wrapped around a weapon to be thrown at an enemy. They are very versatile and one of the basic ninja tools. As one would expect from an explosive, it deals a large amount of splash damage to those within its area of effect (About 3 meters) as well as knocking them back. Readying the tag takes a few seconds of uninterrupted concentration, as does detonating it. Setting off any more than a few at a time can be taxing on the user and lead to fatigue.

Body Replacement Justsu
Tiger, Boar, Ox, Dog, Snake
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[spoiler][/spoiler](Foresight, Burst Movement)(300 OM)
In the moments where the user foresees an attack, with this jutsu they are able to substitute their body with a decoy that has undergone transformation jutsu to look exactly like them. The decoy takes the damage instead. The decoy is usually made of, but not limited to, wooden logs (Any inanimate object will do). This creates an optical illusion, making the enemy think the attack was successful. From this, the user can use the lapse in the enemy's attention to their advantage. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise.

Sword of Kusanagi
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(Physical Strength)(300 OM)
The artifact Sasuke won from Dante’s Abyss doesn’t even need to be active in order to be formidable weapon. Though it lacks the electric might in its passive form, it still has the harsh bite of sharp steal. Best used for piercing and slashing, the blade adequately fits the guile and speed of Sasuke Uchiha. With a black scabbard and matching hilt, it was known to be a larger size than a normal chokutō.
• Overall Length: 94
• Blade Length: 78.25
• Handle Length: 15.75

I'm not certain on prices or power/proficiency prerequisites, but I think I am in the right ballpark. Let me know what needs changing. Oh, and I want to make my Substitution Jutsu to be a Super Defense as well as a regular move!

Thaal Sinestro Wrote:Magus' Scythe Requires Physical Strength, Ranged Proficiency, 600 OM

The blade known as "Doom" is one of the most terrifying symbols of pain and suffering the people of Guardia. The scythe stands about seven feet long and ends in a long, curved steel blade.

Infused with a portion of Magus' magic, it can be summoned or dismissed in a puff of black and people smoke, and cast blade-shaped shadows as projectiles.

The shadow blades travel a maximum of thirty feet before fading away. It these blades can be cast as quickly as bandit can swing the massive weapon, which usually means no more than one every second.

Quote:Explosive Tag (600)
(Area Attack Proficiency, Remote Control Proficiency)
Also known as a paper bombs, they are scraps of paper inscribed with a special writing, centering around the kanji word for "explode" (爆, baku). Infused with chakra, they will explode after a set amount of time, remotely, or after being ignited by flame, however if detonating, Sasuke must be within range of sight. The tags can be attached to a surface or wrapped around a weapon to be thrown at an enemy. They are very versatile and one of the basic ninja tools. As one would expect from an explosive, it deals a large amount of splash damage to those within its area of effect (About 3 meters) as well as knocking them back. Readying the tag takes a few seconds of uninterrupted concentration, as does detonating it. Tags may be detonated individually, in a sequence, or all at once and though there is no limit to the number of Tags that can be used at once, setting off any more than a 2 or 3 at a time is taxing on the user. It becomes increasingly so if done continuously.

Sasuke Uchiha Wrote:First, let me say thank you, Adam for handling these so quickly! You guys are really on the ball, way to go! ^_^

I've edited Explosive tags to answer your questions:

Quote:Explosive Tag (600)
(Area Attack Proficiency, Remote Control Proficiency)
Also known as a paper bombs, they are scraps of paper inscribed with a special writing, centering around the kanji word for "explode" (爆, baku). Infused with chakra, they will explode after a set amount of time, remotely, or after being ignited by flame, however if detonating, Sasuke must be within range of sight. The tags can be attached to a surface or wrapped around a weapon to be thrown at an enemy. They are very versatile and one of the basic ninja tools. As one would expect from an explosive, it deals a large amount of splash damage to those within its area of effect (About 3 meters) as well as knocking them back. Readying the tag takes a few seconds of uninterrupted concentration, as does detonating it. Tags may be detonated individually, in a sequence, or all at once and though there is no limit to the number of Tags that can be used at once, setting off any more than a 2 or 3 at a time is taxing on the user. It becomes increasingly so if done continuously.

Was I right in the pricing? Should it be less? More?

As for my Substitution Jutsu, was it good as is or do I need to edit? I totally planned on it failing against people with similar or higher speed/tec stats. Also, good call on suppression stealth, I need those as they would make executing the move easier. Was price good at 300?

Sword of Kusanagi: Yes, those measurements are in CM. I will edit xD!

Adam Gaite Wrote:Bringing some of my own moves to the table here.

Déjà fu -- 600 OM (Requires: Physical Strength, Ranged Proficiency, Ranged Materialize Proficiency, Time Manipulation)
With a second to focus, Adam can layer a single regular attack of his — a punch, or kick, or a shot from his rifle — to 'stock' and have ready. At any point within twenty seconds afterward, he can cause the effects of that attack to repeat themselves. A second impact identical to the first, in the same location, would strike at his opponent, a second shot of laser fire would suddenly blast from out of nowhere aimed at the same initial target.

Chronozap -- 300 OM (Requires: Ranged Proficiency, Time Manipulation)
A simple flick of the hand, akin to tossing a pebble or something, is all it takes to kick off this attack. It fires a small spark or bolt of distorted time, travelling with speed very similar to a bullet fired from an average handgun. It travels out to about thirty meters before losing effectiveness, and upon impact with anything with its range it releases a burst of fizzling static and rips time apart in its (very small; only a few inches) radius, both aging and de-aging the affected location at the same time. The effect is very unpleasant and painful, but not overly debilitating in and of itself. It is only the relative rapidity with which such bolts can be fired that make them dangerous at all, with Adam being able to hurl them just slightly faster than once per second, and the effects growing more intense the more that hit the same location.

Chronophage -- 300 OM (Requires: Time Manipulation)
Holding out one hand, Adam creates a field of distorted time, roughly thirty inches across. Manifesting it takes approximately a second, but it can be sustained for up to ten seconds before time's normal flow returns. The shield is capable of destroying minor projectiles and weapons that come in contact with it. Melee weapons may find themselves rusting or crumbling away, only to reform completely fine once out of the affected radius, while projectiles such as bullets or arrows or other minor weapons will simply disintegrate without a trace. When this shield does fade away, there is a short pause before it can be readied again, and using it too rapidly in succession is ill-advised due to the energy costs.

Off the Handle -- 0 OM (Requires: Time Manipulation, maybe Area Attack?)
Sometimes, when Adam just completely loses his temper, things get a little....weird. Time in the immediate area around him, for about two meters in every direction, just flips its shit and starts lurching around, slingshotting between past, present and future, causing the ground under him to pile up, erode into a depression, revert to its normal state, and plant life to rapidly regress or advance in age, withering away and rejuvenating to its prime, walls and structures to weather and crack, restore themselves to fresh construction states, and the like. These effects are temporary and do not extend beyond the usage of this 'technique', and immediately cease when Adam gets his shit together (or gets smacked out of it), and accomplish just a little bit less than nothing, though it might be good for messing with someone's head.

Ruby Fist Tier 2 Super Attack -- 800 OM (Requires: Physical Strength)
Taking a moment to prepare, Adam's entire body is enshrouded in a red aura, and he seems to flicker as he rapidly phases in and out of sync with the 'normal' flow of time. When he is ready, he explodes into motion, making for his target with all due speed and releases a thundering volley of punches with such tremendous force and speed it fades to literally a blur of red, seeming to bombard his target with hundreds of blows in only an instant, finishing with one massive uppercut that strikes like a piledriver, knocking his opponent flying.

Minato Namikaze Wrote:

Adam Gaite Wrote:Bringing some of my own moves to the table here.

Déjà fu -- 600 OM (Requires: Physical Strength, Ranged Proficiency, Ranged Materialize Proficiency, Time Manipulation)
With a second to focus, Adam can layer a single regular attack of his — a punch, or kick, or a shot from his rifle — to 'stock' and have ready. At any point within twenty seconds afterward, he can cause the effects of that attack to repeat themselves. A second impact identical to the first, in the same location, would strike at his opponent, a second shot of laser fire would suddenly blast from out of nowhere aimed at the same initial target.

Chronozap -- 300 OM (Requires: Ranged Proficiency, Time Manipulation)
A simple flick of the hand, akin to tossing a pebble or something, is all it takes to kick off this attack. It fires a small spark or bolt of distorted time, travelling with speed very similar to a bullet fired from an average handgun. It travels out to about thirty meters before losing effectiveness, and upon impact with anything with its range it releases a burst of fizzling static and rips time apart in its (very small; only a few inches) radius, both aging and de-aging the affected location at the same time. The effect is very unpleasant and painful, but not overly debilitating in and of itself. It is only the relative rapidity with which such bolts can be fired that make them dangerous at all, with Adam being able to hurl them just slightly faster than once per second, and the effects growing more intense the more that hit the same location.

Chronophage -- 300 OM (Requires: Time Manipulation)
Holding out one hand, Adam creates a field of distorted time, roughly thirty inches across. Manifesting it takes approximately a second, but it can be sustained for up to ten seconds before time's normal flow returns. The shield is capable of destroying minor projectiles and weapons that come in contact with it. Melee weapons may find themselves rusting or crumbling away, only to reform completely fine once out of the affected radius, while projectiles such as bullets or arrows or other minor weapons will simply disintegrate without a trace. When this shield does fade away, there is a short pause before it can be readied again, and using it too rapidly in succession is ill-advised due to the energy costs.

Off the Handle -- 0 OM (Requires: Time Manipulation, maybe Area Attack?)
Sometimes, when Adam just completely loses his temper, things get a little....weird. Time in the immediate area around him, for about two meters in every direction, just flips its shit and starts lurching around, slingshotting between past, present and future, causing the ground under him to pile up, erode into a depression, revert to its normal state, and plant life to rapidly regress or advance in age, withering away and rejuvenating to its prime, walls and structures to weather and crack, restore themselves to fresh construction states, and the like. These effects are temporary and do not extend beyond the usage of this 'technique', and immediately cease when Adam gets his shit together (or gets smacked out of it), and accomplish just a little bit less than nothing, though it might be good for messing with someone's head.

Ruby Fist Tier 2 Super Attack -- 800 OM (Requires: Physical Strength)
Taking a moment to prepare, Adam's entire body is enshrouded in a red aura, and he seems to flicker as he rapidly phases in and out of sync with the 'normal' flow of time. When he is ready, he explodes into motion, making for his target with all due speed and releases a thundering volley of punches with such tremendous force and speed it fades to literally a blur of red, seeming to bombard his target with hundreds of blows in only an instant, finishing with one massive uppercut that strikes like a piledriver, knocking his opponent flying.

Deja Fu - So you're using Time Manipulation to create a second attack that is delayed and not visible?

With Punches and Kicks, would it be like a phantom fist just comes out of nowhere and attacks his opponent? Also, does this attack aim itself at Adam's opponent, or does it just aim at where his opponent was when he first activated Deja Fu? Why is this 600 (is it supposed to be a super move)?

Chronozap - It's a projectile made of time(?) that will rip into an enemy, if hit in the same spot a lot of times? How draining are these to use?

Chronophage - How long is the short pause until it can be used again?

Off the Handle - This, to me, is fine as long as the actual time distortions will not effect anyone but the environment around Adam and his opponent. Also as long as the aging and de-aging of the environment does not effect the battle in any way.

Ruby Fist - Good to Go my man.

Adam Gaite Wrote:Deja Fu — Excellent. And yeah, it's not something to be using too often. 'Bout 20 seconds or so between uses is around when it's 'safe' to use it again.

Chronophage — Yeah, enough damage and it'll break before it wears off. The shield can take a fair few hits from fairly weak attacks, like from automatic weapons and the like well enough, but stronger hits will wear out the field of time quicker, like slower-firing firearms, or stronger/more focused attacks. A good charged attack would pretty much shatter it instantly, or near enough to it.

Naruto Uzumaki Wrote:

Adam Gaite Wrote:More information needed, friend. How long does it take to summon them in the first place? Assuming six seconds like the re-summoning time, but need to know. What's the fire rate, the range, and the relative punch each shot packs?

This better?

Cowboy Disguise: Six-Shooter Revolvers - 300 OM

Naruto makes use of summoning scrolls to reveal two fully loaded six-shooter revolvers (same as the re-summoning time). Both take the appearance as so:

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Once out of ammo, Naruto must take 6 seconds to summon a new pair of guns. Maximum range is 90 yards, and each bullet packs the punch of a .44-40 caliber bullet. There about 2 seconds between each shot to cock the gun, during which time Naruto can use his other gun to shoot provided he doesn't have to reload that as well.

This can only be used while Naruto is in his cowboy disguise.

Akame Wrote:... (No name available.) Tier one powered-up form. -requires Physical Strength.

The Murasame remembers all the lives it takes, and Akame accepts the judgement of all those lives she has taken. The user(Akame) raises their blade to their jugular vein where they lightly slice it open. The curse runs through their body. Most people would die from this, but if the user overcomes the curse, they are given an amazing boost to their powers. The body is covered in curse symbols and marks.

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The trump card is activated in the same way every time, like shown in the video, at 2:35-3:38ish.

New base stats

ATK: 6
DEF: 1
SPD: 4
TEC: 5

JayKit Wrote:I don't know if this got approved yet so I wanted to post it again to see. If it was I sorry I did not see it.

Terra Wolf Pack Assault-600OM (Requires: Range Proficiency, Remote Control Proficiency)- Jay slams his hand onto the ground causing two wolves made from the very earth four feet from his opponents feet. These wolves take 16 seconds to form. These wolves are about 3 feet tall and a foot and half long. They shoot out of the ground rushing his opponent growling and snarling. The wolves can run at 36 miles per hour.The wolves try to bite and claw at any part of the opponent they can. They are controlled by both of Jays hands leaving him vulnerable and unable to use his hands to defend himself. He must remain motionless while using this attack. The wolves are easily destroyed by hitting them three times.
Black Onix Bow Staff- 300 OM(Physical Strength Proficiency)- Made of a hard onyx from Jay's home world. The staff is light , but made of a sturdy material. It is faster than a sword but won't pack as much of a punch. The staff is about 5 ft long and as thick as a half-dollar coin.
Gale Force Wave- 600 OM(Range Proficiency )- Jay gathers strong winds around his hand or staff. He then fires off small bursts of wind by waving his hand or bow staff. It is capable of deflecting small projectiles and if used up close on an oppoenet can cause them to be blown back two feet. Being hit by the wave is like a punch. The wave is about 3 feet long and foot wide. This move takes about five seconds to charge.

Yu Kanda Wrote:Illusion : Angelic wings, ( requires flight 1800 OM )
Getting more in sync with his innocence Kanda has the ability to call upon his innocence to carry him through the air. White/ blue innocence energy emerges from Kanda's back, taking the form of two wings. These wings give Kanda the ability to fly through the air. These wings cannot be cut as they consist out of innocence energy.

Tier 2 Super move ( 800 OM )
Second forbidden illusion: Heavenly wrath
Darkness fills the sky as a ball of innocence energy emerges from the dark sky and descents to the exorcist. Kanda's swords can absorb the massive energy, they will emit a bright white/blue light that breaks the darkness around him. He then drives both swords in the ground, the light vanishing. Controlling the energy thought the ground anyone can see the 8 lightning shaped cracks going through the ground on their way to the target. They are controlled by Kanda, they surround their target and all 8 beams shoot up, slowly closing in before creating a large beam shooting towards the sky, clearing the darkness above. Decending of the innocence ball takes 6 seconds excluding the sky turning black. Kanda is free to use the energy after his swords absorbed the energy, it has to be used within 1 min before the energy gets lost.

Tier 1 Super Defense move ( 600 OM )
Stigmata illusion : Innocence crystal.
The innocence recognizes a life threatening threat and protects it user. Stigmata signs appear on both his wrists as his ankles, releasing the exorcist blood. The blood merges with the innocence energy and creates a large crystal around the exorcist, protecting him from harm. The stigmata emerges moments before an actual threat appears, but the crystal forms within a single second. It does hurt Kanda when his blood mixes with the energy but it doesn't damage him. The crystal forms itself within 2 seconds.

Stigmata weapon : Illusion : blood bow ( 300 OM )
The stigmata mark appears on his left wrist, blood mixes with innocence energy and forms a blood red Crystal longbow with a blue energy string. Kanda is able to shoot blue innocence arrows that are able to travel for 80 meters before losing speed and power. Summoning this weapon takes 3 seconds. The longbow is 1.60m long.

Tier 1 super move : Stigmata illusion : Cleansing Arrow ( 600 OM )
With his blood bow out Kanda is able to use this move. The stigmata mark appears on his right wrist as well, creating a blood red crystal arrow. The massive arrow will be shot with great speed and force, blue innocence energy thrusts the arrow forward with high speed, piercing anything on his path. And like a missile it will create a giant explosion once it is no longer moving. Creating the arrow takes 3 seconds. Aiming and firing depends on the situation. The range is 200 Meters, the huge arrow is 1 meter long.

JayKit Wrote:

JayKit Wrote:I don't know if this got approved yet so I wanted to post it again to see. If it was I sorry I did not see it.

Terra Wolf Pack Assault-600OM (Requires: Range Proficiency, Remote Control Proficiency)- Jay slams his hand onto the ground causing two wolves made from the very earth four feet from his opponents feet. These wolves take 16 seconds to form. These wolves are about 3 feet tall and a foot and half long. They shoot out of the ground rushing his opponent growling and snarling. The wolves can run at 36 miles per hour.The wolves try to bite and claw at any part of the opponent they can. They are controlled by both of Jays hands leaving him vulnerable and unable to use his hands to defend himself. He must remain motionless while using this attack. The wolves are easily destroyed by hitting them three times.
Black Onix Bow Staff- 300 OM(Physical Strength Proficiency)- Made of a hard onyx from Jay's home world. The staff is light , but made of a sturdy material. It is faster than a sword but won't pack as much of a punch. The staff is about 5 ft long and as thick as a half-dollar coin.
Gale Force Wave- 600 OM(Range Proficiency )- Jay gathers strong winds around his hand or staff. He then fires off small bursts of wind by waving his hand or bow staff. It is capable of deflecting small projectiles and if used up close on an oppoenet can cause them to be blown back two feet. Being hit by the wave is like a punch. The wave is about 3 feet long and foot wide. This move takes about five seconds to charge.

King Axorn Wrote:Dragonsbane: (600) (Physical Strength, Ranged Proficiency, Remote Control Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency)
Dragonsbane is a powerful gunblade created by Axorn with a moderate weight. It can either be used for melee attacks or can have a sharp crystal fired from the tip which, after activated from a long period of concentration (About 7 seconds), will create an explosion of fire, thus setting fire to anything flammable within it's 3cm radius before the crystal disintegrates. The sword can only hold 12 crystals at a time, and has a large recoil, forcing the user to plant their feet before firing if they don't want to fall over.

Controlled Holy Fire (600) (Requires Ranged Proficiency, Telepathy, Remote Control Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency): Axorn breathes out a 3 inch diameter flamethrower-like blast of fire which can be changed to any temperature at which a fire is possible and, if the victim is willing, purify them, clearing all dark thoughts from the person and leave them with a clear conscience. Dark thoughts can still return to the person's mind although they take longer to manifest themselves. Axorn can, at the end of a battle that he has won, use this, if the person is willing, to give them a second chance. This coincidentally, always has an effect on Axorn, keeping his mind clear of dark thoughts and protecting him from corruption. If the fire is not in a "Cool Flame" state, it will set fire to anything flammable, inflicting it with a burn.

Flame Shield: (600) (Buff Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency)
Axorn creates a barrier of flame around himself that weakens the damage of foes, while also lighting himself on fire, allowing any of his attacks to create a burn on the target. The shield take roughly three seconds of concentration to manifest itself, and can be used on another character by direct contact with Axorn for a few seconds, during which Axorn is willing to grant the shield buff. The fire does not hurt the user/buffed character, but will harm their opponent. The buff lasts for about 10 seconds, after which the flames will disperse.

Tom Marvolo Riddle Wrote:Fiendfyre Rapier Conjuration [Ensis Umbraduro]
Cost: 300 Om
Requires: Physical Strength
With a flick of the wand and the spell’s two second incantation non-verbally or verbally invoked, the user draws upon a dark, hungry cursed fire of the fiendfyre conjuration. It is a fire which burns and hums with a deep red flame that seems to struggle against its narrowly confined bonds of magic. These bonds shackle the fire into a French styled rapier with an intricately formed hand guard that surrounds the whole of the wand. Each of these black cored, red burning, swirling rune twisted guards seems to be made of living snakes. The 130cm blade itself is more normal in appearance with a center of its black core formed from weaved runes and a scale patterned along the blade’s outer surface.

The spell utilizes a decent amount of power as a kicker but once invoked once it may be dismissed and respelled quickly at little cost later on.

Jak Mar Wrote:Natural Claws - ( Requires Dark Jak, Debuff (300 OM) In the form DARK JAK, Dark Jak's claws are sharp enough to pierce armor and Dark Jak's claws also spout dark eco electricity causing that electricity to stun an enemy as long as Jak is in his Dark form.

Dark Bomb- (Requires Physical Strength, Slam, Area Attack Proficiency) 300 OM- Dark Jak jumps up in the air and aims his fist toward the ground, causing a shockwave of dark eco to spread across the ground, pushing back an enemy about 15 feet. It takes Dark Jak about a few seconds to jump and hit the ground.