Minato Namikaze Wrote:

Tom Marvolo Riddle Wrote:

Tom Marvolo Riddle Wrote:Connor reminded me I wanted a similar move for a while now and it would perhaps be useful in the upcoming days and it will be a good lead in when I finally purchase a vault. This one however I intend to pay for asap:

Manifold [Reveraplicio]
Cost: 300 Om
Requires: N/A
[Seponum] To Banish; [Repetos] To recall
The Manifold spell allows the caster to tear and create an access into a dimensional fold of reality capable of holding and storing any number of items and then later retrieve them elsewhere as needed; even after their death and subsequent revival. Unfortunately however these pocket universes are quite fragile, and due to their metaphysical weight, any Artefacts hidden away will fall through into reality near the caster’s corpse while other items will remain protected.

Its been over a week and two full pages. This is an actual move rather that fodder as well. More or less Tom's version of bags of holding.

This is only used for storing items and then retrieving those stored items at a later date, correct? What I mean is, there isn't anything already in this little storage unit that tom can pull out?

Quote:Manifold [Reveraplicio]
Cost: 300 Om
Requires: N/A
[Seponum] To Banish; [Repetos] To recall
The Manifold spell allows the caster to tear and create an access into a dimensional fold of reality capable of holding and storing any number of items and then later retrieve them elsewhere as needed; even after their death and subsequent revival. Unfortunately however these pocket universes are quite fragile, and due to their metaphysical weight, any Artefacts hidden away will fall through into reality near the caster’s corpse while other items will remain protected.

The Manifold's tear only expands large enough to accommodate the item being banished, summoned, or the contents being searched and no more than a meter and a half in radius.

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Tom Marvolo Riddle Wrote:

Quote:Manifold [Reveraplicio]
Cost: 300 Om
Requires: N/A
[Seponum] To Banish; [Repetos] To recall
The Manifold spell allows the caster to tear and create an access into a dimensional fold of reality capable of holding and storing any number of items and then later retrieve them elsewhere as needed; even after their death and subsequent revival. Unfortunately however these pocket universes are quite fragile, and due to their metaphysical weight, any Artefacts hidden away will fall through into reality near the caster’s corpse while other items will remain protected.

The Manifold's tear only expands large enough to accommodate the item being banished, summoned, or the contents being searched and no more than a meter and a half in radius.

How's that?

Tom Marvolo Riddle Wrote:Manifold [Reveraplicio]
Cost: 300 Om
Requires: N/A
[Seponum] To Banish; [Repetos] To recall
The Manifold spell allows the caster to tear and create an access into a dimensional fold of reality capable of holding and storing any number of items and then later retrieve them elsewhere as needed; even after their death and subsequent revival. Unfortunately however these pocket universes are quite fragile, and due to their metaphysical weight, any Artefacts hidden away will fall through into reality near the caster’s corpse while other items will remain protected.

The Manifold's tear only expands large enough to accommodate the item being banished, summoned, or the contents being searched and no more than a meter and a half in radius. Living beings cannot be stored within a Manifold.

Dust Wrote:

Quote: Dust wrote:
A Pup’s Bite - 300 OM
Another basic attack of Dust’s, partially transforming his teeth. They become sharp, but no bigger than his normal teeth. This happens over a matter of seconds, but only lasts for a bite. Hit or miss, he only has a moment to take advantage of the new chompers.
-The cost for this is a simple kiss that lasts 3 seconds at least.


This move is fine but just tell me how fast it takes to transform his teeth. Also the way he activates this is a kiss if I'm correct in my reading?

The growth is quick, so... 3 seconds? "Matter of seconds" Its a quick lash move.
And Dust is a contractor, requiring a price to be paid to use any of his powers, so the more extreme trasformations will require more intense or longer kiss. Which can be done before or after, but must be performed or else his brain will explode!!

Or something.. It is never explained what happened if the price is not paid in the anime.

Athena Myaló Wrote:

Gilgamesh Wrote:

Athena Myaló Wrote:Illusory Cacophony (Tier 1 Super Utility) - Athena takes several moments (5-10 seconds or so) to concentrate on the mind of the target. Once she has achieved focus (she cannot be actively doing anything else during this time, even semi-automatic functions such as walking), she essentially targets the sound receptors in the brain of the target, causing incredibly loud and discordant noise to explode in their mind. It sounds as if someone hit all the keys of a piano at once right next to each of the target's ears, but even louder, and it cannot be blocked out by covering their ears, since it originates inside their head. The sound starts out powerful enough to block all traces of organized thought. From there, it fades gradually, taking about 30 seconds to peter out completely. (For the first ten seconds at least, tasks such as aiming a weapon, hearing any other noises, or communicating are virtually impossible.) As soon as the sound first goes off, Athena can once again turn her attention to other matters. After the 30 seconds, there is no lasting damage to the target. (Side note: this usually even works on deaf targets: it just depends on whether the reason for their deafness is a problem with their ears, or the nerves that transmit auditory signals to their brain.)
(600 OM: Requires Ranged Attack Proficiency, Area Attack Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency, Homing Proficiency, and Telepathy)

Wait this is only used on secondaries? Why are you making it a super move? I mean you can easily make it offensive or utility if you needed. If you want something on secondaries it would just be a move.

i would try and make it less super specific and say instead like "At fist the pain is unbearable and the target loses hearing and motor functions for the next 30 seconds, however the effect slowly decays during this time." Just a suggestion.

You could also make this offensive and have it do actual damage if you wanted.

Well, it's not only for secondaries. That's the way I want to use it at first (during my next post, actually), which is why I'm buying the Area Attack Proficiency, but I'd like to be able to use it against other single PCs as well at later points (the description I wrote is when it's used on one fellow Prime, since that's how I'd use it in an official context - I imagine the effect will be much weaker on multiple targets... should I include that in the description?). Should I change it to a regular move, though? I hadn't thought of that... I'd just assumed that since it was pretty powerful and took a lot of energy, it had to be a Super Move. What do you think would be best, so I could use it both against a bunch of secondaries or a single Prime target depending on the situation? Actually, it would be nice to be able to use it on multiple Primes at once, too, come to think of it.

Okay, I made some edits to the move up there in the quote to simplify it. How's it look now? ||)

Ehhh, I have a couple reasons I'd rather keep it from actually doing damage. The way it is is fine.

Ballad Wrote:Flamethrower Pistol (requires Area Attack Proficiency, requires Debuff Proficiency, requires Ranged Proficiency) - 600 OM


Unlike all the other weapons Ballad has at the moment, the Flamethrower Pistol is an entirely new weapon to his arsenal. It works by having a single piece of solid wick connected to the end of the barrel of the pistol, lighting it up when Ballad flicks his thumb against the bottom of the wick. Then, a canister similar in size to a standard rotating cylinder for normal revolvers is inserted into the side of the revolver, also similar to how one would reload a normal revolver. Then, when Ballad pulls the trigger of the revolver, an archaic hammer from within the revolver pops off the cap of the canister, letting loose a gust of air from the barrel as well as the wick within it, causing the wick to light on fire and serve as a flamethrower.

The canister has enough wind and wick to last for a total of six seconds before reloading, meaning each second must count. Thankfully, the flamethrower has several uses. The nature of the wick allows the flames to stick to surfaces, creating walls of fire that damage anyone who tries to pass them. These flames last around ten seconds unless something flammable is touched, in which case it would last around one minute. These flames are also capable of sticking to living beings like napalm, and provide damage overtime, though this only works if they are hit directly by the flames, and not from the walls of fire. The flames themselves are heavily damaging, though this is overcome by the short range of the flamethrower, with a maximum range being six feet, as well as low fuel that only lasts six seconds. The reloading time takes a total of two seconds to complement the short range and short usage, though he will be reloading a lot to make use of the flamethrower despite its damage and ability to stick to surfaces.

Quote:All bolded words are the ones being improved.

Bandit With No Name Wrote:@Gilg: Yeah! It's mostly a flavor move. People get "really sick" and can take personal agency over what that means. If they want their faces to melt, awesome, if they want to feel a bit dizzy but otherwise fine, also cool.

Gilgamesh Wrote:

Bandit With No Name Wrote:@Gilg: Yeah! It's mostly a flavor move. People get "really sick" and can take personal agency over what that means. If they want their faces to melt, awesome, if they want to feel a bit dizzy but otherwise fine, also cool.

Could you give it a small charge time to do this instead of a natural tendency or passive. If you do that it'll be fine

Gilgamesh Wrote:Oh...i thought if she like touched you with a finger it would work. The move is fine if its just your belly

Quote:All bolded words are the ones being improved.

Also edited

Gilgamesh Wrote:Yeah i mean it could be a move if only used on secondaries but this is worthy of a super move. Just one last thing. Reduce the time of the deafening by a little cause it is only a tier one and 30 seconds is quite long.

Athena Myaló Wrote:Illusory Cacophony (Tier 1 Super Utility) - Athena takes several moments (5-10 seconds or so) to concentrate on the mind of the target. Once she has achieved focus (she cannot be actively doing anything else during this time, even semi-automatic functions such as walking), she essentially targets the sound receptors in the brain of the target, causing incredibly loud and discordant noise to explode in their mind. It sounds as if someone hit all the keys of a piano at once right next to each of the target's ears, but even louder, and it cannot be blocked out by covering their ears, since it originates inside their head. The sound starts out powerful enough to block all traces of organized thought. From there, it fades gradually, taking about 15 seconds to peter out completely. (For the first five seconds at least, tasks such as aiming a weapon, hearing any other noises, or communicating are virtually impossible.) As soon as the sound first goes off, Athena can once again turn her attention to other matters. After the 15 seconds, there is no lasting damage to the target. (Side note: this usually even works on deaf targets: it just depends on whether the reason for their deafness is a problem with their ears, or the nerves that transmit auditory signals to their brain.)
(600 OM: Requires Ranged Attack Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency, Homing Proficiency, and Telepathy)

Original Wrote:Twin Sacrificial Rebirth
Cost: 600 Om
Requires: Remote Control Proficiency, Hive Mind, Shape Shifting
The base technique to which Ururu made her life and lies with. Through a series of hand seals and channeling of chakra Ururu can bring life to lifelessness, and generate a single durable replica of herself within a moment. Through time and effort of the creation process the user can generate significant appearance and clothing alterations as part of the clone's base that otherwise do not affect the clone's moves, nor equipment load-out.

Combat effectiveness matches the user’s own in terms of skills and physical ability provided they assume direct control (read the user is committed to continuous concentration and limited movement), through Soul Transference or similar. Autonomous use though personas (artificial personalities) is ineffective in combat without Tiered Assist to power their bodily functions beyond existing, a target, as a meat shield, or an authentic corpse. Said corpse will remain upon death to decay or until dismissed by the user. Range does not extend beyond the verse’s borders in which the user currently occupies.

The cost of this technique is a single decent payment of chakra that can be staggering if used several times in a short period consecutively.

Note Wrote:Adjusted for Omni's request. Includes a range. Eliminated any chance of confusion that Personas can possibly function autonomously as an assist without SP. They can't. Never could. They are glorified secondaries. Included the 30 second minimum of time and then some. There is no way of getting around it without it weakening the technique and the clones consequently. Unlike the example of clones given in the system these require a higher level of TEC to handle much fewer bodies. This is by design.

Original Wrote:Immortality - Soul Transference
Cost: 300 Om
Requires: Teleportation
With this technique the user unlocks their Network Interface Seal and targets a clone within range of their control that is a replica of themselves. Upon doing so the user leaves behind their body and enters that of targeted vessel, such as the Twin Sacrificial Rebirth or similar.

Unfortunately due to the nature of Omnilium and its interaction with chakra and this technique any current injuries the user has are reproduced upon entering into the new body. Furthermore while this technique is instantaneous, it leaves the user physically weakened for a few seconds as any chakra they carry with them is redistributed into the new body. The previous body is subsequently considered a clone and can be loaded with a persona as desired or left without.

This transference is permanent unless it or similar is performed again.

Note Wrote:Just to be sure this is understood, this technique does not allow Ururu to take on any appearance other than her own, merely control the age of her own body and it remains identifiably her.