(05-24-2018, 03:55 PM)Victor Wolfe Wrote: Artful Dodger( tier 1 super defence, requires master acrobat, burst movement, basic super jumping) (600 OM)

when in danger Victor can leap with a short burst of movement in any direction to allow himself to escape the threat of attack unless, from a tier 2 or higher, this will cause him to react too slowly, and only mitigate some of the damage. His acrobatic skills allow him to always land on balance. 

Bold are the changes, this ok?

(05-24-2018, 05:32 PM)Makoto Yuki Wrote: The True Self - T1 Powered Up Form - 1000 OM

ATK: 5
DEF: 3
SPD: 5
TEC: 3

Makoto's shadow self, an embodiment of his repressed negative qualities, momentarily rises to the surface out of self-preservation. Physical changes are limited to his irises turning a bright gold and his expression freezing on a slightly unhinged grin. He becomes more aggressive and reckless while in this form, mostly rushing straight into battle. His increased strength better allows him to wield his heavy armaments with one hand while he uses the other to slap your shit.

(Note: I have an extra stat point unlocked.)

(05-24-2018, 05:50 PM)Ricter Wrote: Lanor: (1200 OM) [Requires Physical Strength, Healing, Buff]

Is a 4’7”ft long, 5 inch width, double edged broad sword that has a stainless steel look to it with a brown handle and cross-guard, being balanced in speed and weight. After a five second channel time the blade can be toggled too close small wounds of any living things it slices, leaving non painful glowing gashes that mend small cuts on the body and vanish after contact with the blade has ended. For large wounds he would need to deliver one strong slash or stab after a three second wind-up, which makes the wound stop bleeding, closing it and ensuring it doesn't again unless another wound is made along the same location. This doesn't heal the wounds sustained but more so mitigates bleeding out from them and minor pain as well. After another five second channel it may return to a normal blade, the blade cannot damage or harm any organic targets while charged and it behaves normally to metal contact.

Touching the face of his sword he can hold it there for over five seconds before pulling it away and touching someone, leaving a glowing paw print on them after two seconds of contact. The mark effectively turns pain into rapture as any damage they are suffering is still present, but the feeling of discomfort is reduced to being very minor to just being numb to it for the duration. The mark lasts for around thirty seconds and can be applied and maintained so long as it’s himself, or an ally stays with in five feet of him in this variation, which ends immediately if they leave past this range. He can hold the power for up to ten seconds before it needs to be administered or else he loses it entirely and suffers some energy loss, if a hostile debuff is targeting the person applied with this the mark will vanish once the period of the debuff runs its course. After applying it once he needs to wait more than a minute to apply it again on someone.

(05-24-2018, 06:48 PM)Ricter Wrote: Lanor: (1200 OM) [Requires Physical Strength, Healing, Buff]

Is a 4’7”ft long, 5 inch width, double edged broad sword that has a stainless steel look to it with a brown handle and cross-guard, being balanced in speed and weight. After a five second channel time the blade can be toggled too close small wounds of any living things it slices, leaving non painful glowing gashes that mend small cuts on the body and vanish after contact with the blade has ended. For large wounds he would need to deliver one strong slash or stab after a three second wind-up, which makes the wound stop bleeding, closing it and ensuring it doesn't again unless another wound is made along the same location. This doesn't heal the wounds sustained but more so mitigates bleeding out from them and minor pain as well. After another five second channel it may return to a normal blade, the blade cannot damage or harm any organic targets while charged and it behaves normally to metal contact.

Touching the face of his sword while staying still he can hold it there for over three seconds before pulling it away and touching someone, leaving a glowing paw print on them instantly on contact, which can be done while in motion. The mark effectively turns pain into rapture as any damage they are suffering is still present, but the feeling of discomfort is reduced to being very minor to just being numb to it for the duration. The mark lasts for around a minute and can be applied and maintained so long as it’s himself, or an ally that stays with in thirty meters of him. He can hold the power for up to ten seconds before it needs to be administered or else he loses it entirely and suffers some energy loss. After applying it once he needs to wait more than a minute to apply it again on someone once the duration is over.

(05-24-2018, 07:04 PM)Ricter Wrote: >Oh okay I get it, so it would still fall under my healing power rather than the survival power.

Lanor: (1200 OM) [Requires Physical Strength, Healing, Buff]

Is a 4’7”ft long, 5 inch width, double edged broad sword that has a stainless steel look to it with a brown handle and cross-guard, being balanced in speed and weight. After a five second channel time the blade can be toggled too close small wounds of any living things it slices, leaving non painful glowing gashes that mend small cuts on the body and vanish after contact with the blade has ended. For large wounds he would need to deliver one strong slash or stab after a three second wind-up, which makes the wound stop bleeding, closing it and ensuring it doesn't again unless another wound is made along the same location. This doesn't heal the wounds sustained but more so mitigates bleeding out from them and minor pain as well. After another five second channel it may return to a normal blade, the blade cannot damage or harm any organic targets while charged and it behaves normally to metal contact.

Touching the face of his sword while staying still he can hold it there for over five seconds before pulling it away and touching someone, leaving a glowing paw print on them after two seconds of contact, which can be done while in motion. The mark effectively turns pain into rapture as any damage they are suffering is still present, but the feeling of discomfort is reduced to being very minor to just being numb to it for the duration. The mark lasts for around a minute and can be applied and maintained so long as it’s himself, or an ally that stays with in thirty meters of him. He can hold the power for up to ten seconds before it needs to be administered or else he loses it entirely and suffers some energy loss. After applying it once he needs to wait more than a minute to apply it again on someone once the duration is over.

(05-24-2018, 08:56 PM)Handsome Jack Wrote: Tier 1 Super Defense: Ha! You suck! (600 OM)
Wait... did... did you seriously just miss me? How the fuck did you miss me!? You are hilariously inept!
Jack's opponent rolls a natural one, somehow missing HJ in spite of all the odds. Jack spends the next few seconds laughing at the loser.

(05-25-2018, 03:16 PM)Victor Wolfe Wrote: Smouldering Gaze (Tier 2 Utility, 800 OM, Debuff Proficiency, Ranged Proficiency): Vic looks upon his opponent with a gaze so filled with sinful intent that it can literally melt armour and weaken the defences of his opponents. This debuff causes defence to drop by four points total. Multiple people can be targeted, up to four total, in which case each person will receive a -1 to DEF. When split between multiple people the debuff amount will increase from -1 DEF with the longer the gaze is held. This debuff can be distributed as evenly or unevenly as Victor decides as long as debuffing does not cause someone to have negative DEF and the total DEF debuffed does not exceed four.

This can be blocked by tier two super defences, as shields or getting out of the way of the look quick enough will allow the targets to resist his piercing eyes.

(05-25-2018, 03:20 PM)Dane Regan Wrote:

(05-25-2018, 03:16 PM)Victor Wolfe Wrote: Smouldering Gaze (Tier 2 Utility, 800 OM, Debuff Proficiency, Ranged Proficiency): Vic looks upon his opponent with a gaze so filled with sinful intent that it can literally melt armour and weaken the defences of his opponents. This debuff causes defence to drop by four points total. Multiple people can be targeted, up to four total, in which case each person will receive a -1 to DEF. When split between multiple people the debuff amount will increase from -1 DEF with the longer the gaze is held. This debuff can be distributed as evenly or unevenly as Victor decides as long as debuffing does not cause someone to have negative DEF and the total DEF debuffed does not exceed four.

This can be blocked by tier two super defences, as shields or getting out of the way of the look quick enough will allow the targets to resist his piercing eyes.

You're missing out how long it lasts.

With 2sp, you can lower someone's DEF by 4 points for 1 round. (Or split those between multiple people)

(05-25-2018, 03:22 PM)Victor Wolfe Wrote: Smouldering Gaze (Tier 2 Utility, 800 OM, Debuff Proficiency, Ranged Proficiency): Vic looks upon his opponent with a gaze so filled with sinful intent that it can literally melt armour and weaken the defences of his opponents. This debuff causes defence to drop by four points total. Multiple people can be targeted, up to four total, in which case each person will receive a -1 to DEF. When split between multiple people the debuff amount will increase from -1 DEF with the longer the gaze is held. This debuff can be distributed as evenly or unevenly as Victor decides as long as debuffing does not cause someone to have negative DEF and the total DEF debuffed does not exceed four. This debuff lasts for one round of combat when it hits.

This can be blocked by tier two super defences, as shields or getting out of the way of the look quick enough will allow the targets to resist his piercing eyes.

(05-25-2018, 09:58 PM)Sasuke Uchiha Wrote: Chakra Walking 

Cost: 300 Om
Requires: Physical Strength
Through passive manipulation of chakra within the body, the user is able to attach or anchor themselves to surfaces as if they were normal ground such as walls, ceilings and water without suffering any loss of ability. The technique is basic enough where it costs only a small amount and requires no concentration to perform while still allowing them to perform other chakra intensive techniques.

(05-25-2018, 09:58 PM)Sasuke Uchiha Wrote: Chakra Walking 

Cost: 300 Om
Requires: Physical Strength
Through passive manipulation of chakra within the body, the user is able to attach or anchor themselves to surfaces as if they were normal ground such as walls, ceilings and water without suffering any loss of ability. The technique is basic enough where it costs only a small amount to activate, an even smaller amount to uphold indefinitely, and requires no concentration to perform while still allowing them to perform other chakra intensive techniques.

(05-20-2018, 01:50 PM)Ebonywood Hellscythe Wrote: Making some small edits here. I increased the range, removed the debuff, and increased the general flame strength a bit. Changed the description for the defensive part (basically does the same thing - incinerates weak attacks, weakens stronger ones). Changes in bold.

Old: T2SU - Undying Pheonix (800) Requires: Physical, Debuff, Area Defense, Area Attack
[spoiler]
Ebony focuses, channelling her mana for 5 seconds. Once she starts charging, she can't stop, move, or use any other moves, powers, or attacks. During this time, the air around Ebony begins to heat up painfully. After the charging period, dark purple flames violently erupt from her, setting her on fire for 1 round of combat. These reach out around 1ft from her body and will burn anyone who touches them. If someone remains in direct contact with the fire for longer than a second, the flames spread to them doing continued damage to the burning area for the following three seconds at half strength. Also, should anyone touch the fire on someone else for longer than a second, it spreads to them for three seconds (again, at half the potency as before). And so on. The fire could spread to the same person twice, should they touch their burning shoulder with their hand for a second, for example. Flames at one-eighth strength cannot set anything else on fire and are easy to pat out (so can be easily removed before the 3 seconds are up).

Anyone within 5ft of Ebony also slowly suffers due to the proximity to the heat, and while this move is active, Ebony can only move at half speed. While Ebony will never take damage due to her own flames, this move may leave her feeling dizzy. Also, combustible objects ignited by this can still burn her. Lastly, in addition to damaging near people and objects, the flames also incinerate and weaken projectile attacks (and partially nullify over ranged moves and spells), meaning weaker bullets will have a very reduced effect on her, and stronger ranged attacks will simply be weakened a little bit (based on Ebony's ATK against theirs). While active, Ebony cannot travel faster than half speed or use Immortal Flames. She cannot end this move prematurely but may choose to prolong it by spending an additional 2 SP per round. Using Undying Pheonix is very tiring, and it can take Ebony some time to recover after its use, so she can barely move or attack for 10 seconds afterwards, and once she gets over that she'll still be very tired.

The primary reason this move is so tiring and mana intensive is due to the duration, rather than the potency of its effects. The flames tend to do moderate damage while very close, and only lighter damage when further away (or when passed on). They won't melt steel or anything like that (unless Ebony receives a large increase to her ATK stat). But, naturally, if staying too close it will build up over time.[/spoiler]
New: T2SU - Undying Pheonix (800) Requires: Physical, Area Defense, Area Attack
[spoiler]Ebony focuses, channelling her mana for 5 seconds. Once she starts charging, she can't stop, move, or use any other moves, powers, or attacks. During this time, the air around Ebony begins to heat up painfully. After the charging period, dark purple flames violently erupt from her, setting her on fire for 1 round of combat. These reach out up to 2ft from her body, but anyone within 10ft of Ebony also slowly suffers due to the proximity to the heat - although even outside this range, the fire still feels uncomfortably hot. While Ebony will never take damage due to her own flames, this move may leave her feeling dizzy. Combustible objects ignited by this may still burn her, if not completely destroyed first. Ebony usually has enough passive control over her fire to prevent it from igniting the floor beneath her, but it may still leave scorch marks.

In addition to damaging near people and objects, the flames also weaken or block attacks passing directly through them by incinerating them. This effect will be non-existent to a normal sword (unless it's very weak), and primarily affects ranged attacks. As a result, weaker bullets and projectiles will rarely reach Ebony's skin before being destroyed unless many are fired at roughly the same point (when some will break through). Meanwhile, stronger ranged attacks will simply be weakened a little bit. Anything that can reasonably be burnt or damaged by her magic (including energy attacks, and even water or something that isn't typically "flammable") will be. So, for example, if someone poured acid on Ebony while this move was active, even if it managed to stick to her skin, her fire would continue to work to damage it causing it to be destroyed before it would normally expire. The effectiveness of this "defensive" aspect is based on Ebony's ATK verses the strength (or durability) of the attacks passing through her flames.

While active, Ebony cannot travel faster than half speed or use Immortal Flames. She cannot end this move prematurely but may choose to prolong it by spending an additional 2 SP per round. Using Undying Pheonix is very tiring, and it can take Ebony some time to recover after its use, so she can barely move or attack for 10 seconds afterwards, and once she gets over that she'll still be very tired. The primary reason this move is so tiring and mana intensive is due to the duration, rather than the potency of its effects. Assuming someone's DEF is equal to her ATK, the flames tend to do moderate damage while very close, and only lighter damage when further away. They won't melt steel without prolonged contact or anything like that (unless Ebony receives a large increase to her ATK stat). But, naturally, if staying too close it will quickly build up over time.[/spoiler]