Victor Wolfe Wrote:Now you see me...(Tier 1 super move, requires Physical Strength, Stealth, Debuff) 600 OM
Victor uses his belt to turn invisible and stay out of harms way whilst channeling energy into his blades casing the golden blade to burn with red energy and the silver to glow with a blue aura he slashes at an unsuspecting enemy with the daggers causing a blast of energy to hurt what ever comes into contact with the blades ,used to damage weak points or knock enemy's away or down. this leaves what ever limb or body part is targeted weaker for the next post. With arms weakening attacks and legs slowing movement

hope that explained it better

also now I have this one


Blade Spin( physical strength, Area Attack, not sure if I need ranged(if so I will buy it)300 OM I think: Victor Wolfe attaches his daggers to small chains inside his selves, and spins casing the area around him to be sliced at giving his blades the reach of about six feet in each direction , due to lack of force the blades will not do as large amount of damage as if they where thrust by a hand, but can still deal damage to people with light or no Armour, as it is just a spin there is almost know control with Wolfe only being able to start and stop due to his high speed and good reflexes. the weaknesses are that it is relatively weak only dealing glancing blows against most enemies and can cause Wolfe to get disorientated if used for to long lowering his tech temporarily.

Victor Wolfe Wrote:Now you see me...(Tier 1 super move, requires Physical Strength, Stealth, Debuff) 600 OM
Victor uses his belt to turn invisible and stay out of harms way whilst channeling energy into his blades casing the golden blade to burn with red energy and the silver to glow with a blue aura he slashes at an unsuspecting enemy with the daggers causing a blast of energy to hurt what ever comes into contact with the blades ,used to damage weak points or knock enemy's away or down. this leaves what ever limb or body part is targeted weaker for two minutes. With arms weakening attacks and legs slowing movement



Blade Spin( physical strength, Area Attack, 300 OM I think: Victor Wolfe attaches his daggers to small chains inside his selves, and spins casing the area around him to be sliced at giving his blades the reach of about six feet in each direction , due to lack of force the blades will not do as large amount of damage as if they where thrust by a hand, but can still deal damage to people with light or no Armour, as it is just a spin there is almost know control with Wolfe only being able to start and stop due to his high speed and good reflexes. the weaknesses are that it is relatively weak only dealing glancing blows against most enemies and can cause Wolfe to get disorientated if used for more than a minute lowering his tech temporarily. He is able to move like a spinning top to cover a larger area

thanks for the help Adam

Gildarts Wrote:Those are... Good questions

1 it will last about 45 seconds
2 paralyzed by fear I suppose, but it's more a mental effect than a physical one (or at least, that was what I was going for).

Minato Namikaze Wrote:

Quote:Rasengan (Physical Strength) (300) – The Rasengan is a ball of chakra that is formed in the users hand by spinning and twisting Chakra around the palm of the user’s hand. The chakra is then compressed into a destructive ball of spiraling, blue, chakra that can be thrust into an opponent to cause damage. The Rasegan takes 5 seconds of full concentration to form in the palm of the user’s hands and is able to be maintained for a maximum of 3 minutes before dispersing. Since the Rasengan is a physical form of the user’s chakra, it requires no extra chakra use to maintain it for the entire three minutes. If the Rasengan is not utilized within the 3 minutes, it becomes unstable and disperses into thin air. The size of a normal Rasengan is the size of the users entire palm (this has no effect on the strength of the move).

putting up an Upgrade for this move.

Double Rasengan (+300 OM) - Minato takes an extra five seconds to charge his Rasengan, in this time, he is able to create a second Rasengan in his other hand, effectively producing two separate Rasengan at the same time.

Minato Namikaze Wrote:

Minato Namikaze Wrote:

Quote:Rasengan (Physical Strength) (300) – The Rasengan is a ball of chakra that is formed in the users hand by spinning and twisting Chakra around the palm of the user’s hand. The chakra is then compressed into a destructive ball of spiraling, blue, chakra that can be thrust into an opponent to cause damage. The Rasegan takes 5 seconds of full concentration to form in the palm of the user’s hands and is able to be maintained for a maximum of 3 minutes before dispersing. Since the Rasengan is a physical form of the user’s chakra, it requires no extra chakra use to maintain it for the entire three minutes. If the Rasengan is not utilized within the 3 minutes, it becomes unstable and disperses into thin air. The size of a normal Rasengan is the size of the users entire palm (this has no effect on the strength of the move).

putting up an Upgrade for this move.

Double Rasengan (+300 OM) - Minato takes an extra five seconds to charge his Rasengan, in this time, he is able to create a second Rasengan in his other hand, effectively producing two separate Rasengan at the same time.

Making a change to this as I feel I wasn't clear enough (never got it approved though).

Rasengan: Double form (+300 OM) - Minato holds up whichever hand is not being used for the first Rasengan and, after charging for an extra five seconds, forms a second Rasengan in this hand. Effectively producing two Rasengan, one in each hand.

Lubbock Wrote:Iron Skin (Tier 1 Power-Up - 1000 OM): Lubbock wraps his wires around his torso, arms and legs, highly increasing his defensive potential, as well as increasing the damage of his unarmed strikes and distance he can throw objects. As much of his thread is utilised in this process, it takes around five seconds to armour up.
ATK: +2
DEF: +2
SPD:
TEC: +1

Realm-Cutting Thread (Tier 1 Power-Up - 1000 OM): Cross Tail, Lubbock's weapon, is made from the fur of a large dragon. Covering the creature's vital organs is much stronger, much sharper fur. This fur is Lubbock's strongest thread; the Realm-Cutting Thread. This string can hold back much heavier objects and deal much more damage. The strings also seems to cut through the air itself, speeding up Lubbock's attacks.
ATK: +2
DEF: +1
SPD: +2

Wakka Wrote:Tidal Shot
Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency
Utility Super Move
Wakka forces his life-force into his Blitzball, and then corkscrew kicks into towards the opposition. If it lands successfully, the shot discombobulates Wakka’s opponent, and nullifies the boost of whatever transformation he or she is in. This nullification lasts until the opponent powers back down.
Weaknesses/Limitations
This does not work on alternate forms, or any other form that does not boost the power of the opponent.
This Super Move is only effective on Tier 1 Power-ups/Transformations.
To maintain the nullification of his opponent’s transformation, Wakka must continue to expend SP equivalent to his opponent’s power-up cost, per round (If the opponent decides to discontinue use of their power-up, the Debuff is broken, and Wakka no longer needs to expend SP to maintain the nullification).
Unlike many of his Blitzball attacks, this Move’s trajectory cannot be manipulated, due to the necessary transfer of energy.
Furthermore, Wakka can only use this Super Move (or any other move of this type) once per fight, or else of could potentially kill him.

Trixie Wrote:

Minato Namikaze Wrote:Didn't I already approve Consume Essence?

Essense Purge: Interesting concept and use of Omnillium. How long does it take for the Omnillium to physically manifest?

You did I was just posting it with the changes you requested for the record. Sorry.

Essence Purge: Didn't think of that. Let's say four seconds for four seconds of travel through the person?

Trixie Wrote:

Trixie Wrote:

Minato Namikaze Wrote:Didn't I already approve Consume Essence?

Essense Purge: Interesting concept and use of Omnillium. How long does it take for the Omnillium to physically manifest?

You did I was just posting it with the changes you requested for the record. Sorry.

Essence Purge: Didn't think of that. Let's say four seconds for four seconds of travel through the person?

Do you need any more information?

Adam Gaite Wrote:

Ururu Kyuuei Wrote:Need a fodder power approved for Ururu's own brand of creating secondaries.

Black Star Anchor
Cost: 0 Om
Requires: Fodder; Hive Mind; Communicator
With a set of hand seals, Ururu channels chakra and a dollop of omnilium in her hand to conjure an Obsidian chakra crystal shaped into jewelry. Upon attaching it to a desired clone, its connection to the Network is radically altered causing it to evolve into a Secondary while severing Ururu’s ability to directly control or possess it. This leaves only a Persona capable of piloting the body. Furthermore Ururu may only affect it through communication, dismissing it, or replacing/removing the Persona entirely, otherwise it is entirely independent and able to transverse to new locations and other Verses.

I want to say that this is just fodder and not a problem....but there's something about it I can't quite put my finger on that I'm not entirely sure about. I'll....let someone else take a second look at this one.

Sasuke Uchiha Wrote:

Retane Wrote:T1 Super Move(600 OM SP:1): Dark Reckoning( A Thousand Lashes; Torment of a Thousand Souls)- At one time, being the God of Death, even if he can't remember, Retane's subconscious is still linked to the dark planes. The Emerald Fiend reaches out to a hidden plane, where many souls suffer in torture and agony. He raises his hands to the sky, forcing a rip in time and space. From the tear above, a mass of dark purple energy begins to form. Screams of pain howl throughout rthe air only to be encased in the large orb as a fury of razor shap wind revolved around the the dark energy. When the moment is right, the orb launches at his target. Upon collision, the wind attempts to shred at anything in it's way, making a path for the Orb of Reckoning. As the dark energy hits it's target, it tries to onsume them physically and mentally. The target hears the cries of anguish of a thousand souls and is forced to see the pain and agony one unlucky soul had to feel...

Sounds perplexing and not enjoyable in the slightest. Can we make a slight compromise?

This:

Quote:even if he can't remember, Retane's subconscious is still linked to the dark planes.

To this:

Quote:even if he can't remember, Retane's subconscious believes itself still linked to the dark planes.

Omni doesn't allow for his chosen to have any link to their worlds from before they were brought to the Omniverse. Make this edit and your off like a prom dress.

Also, I approve the alterations you have made for your assists Mark of Lythia. 0 OM, update it.

Gildarts Wrote:

Sasuke Uchiha Wrote:

Gildarts Wrote:Fear- 300 (Debuff, ranged, area attack)

Waves of power roll off Gildarts at a stunning rate, the vibrations, almost rippling through the air like a roar, cause the effected to tremble in trepidation.

Gildarts' finds a balanced stance and notices his pursuer coming for him. He focuses his energy before releasing it outwards, into the air around him, which has a range of five to seven feet around him. After seven feet, the effect dissipates, and anyone beyond that is not effected by the power.

Effect on opponent: They become stunned and are unable to find balance (ie dizziness/cognition disturbance).

There is no charge up time, however, when he uses this repeatedly, he gets very tired. It uses a lot of energy, and can only be used ONCE per battle.

1)How long would this effect last?
2)Is it just like, a moment of hesitation or are we talking about full on paralyzed?

Those are... Good questions

1 it will last about 45 seconds
2 paralyzed by fear I suppose, but it's more a mental effect than a physical one (or at least, that was what I was going for).

Quote:Would taking damage break their paralysis? If not, it is too powerful. 45 seconds of defenseless punching bag time would be devastating in a fight. If taking damage breaks the stun, we can approve this at 300 so long as you make the appropriate edits.