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NPC One Stop Shop - Printable Version +- Omni Archive (https://omni.zulenka.com) +-- Forum: Administration Forums (https://omni.zulenka.com/forumdisplay.php?fid=5) +--- Forum: Update "One Stop" (https://omni.zulenka.com/forumdisplay.php?fid=52) +--- Thread: NPC One Stop Shop (/showthread.php?tid=3735) |
RE: NPC One Stop Shop - Mark - 01-09-2018 Warren: You'll need to change Ricky's history. Secondaries becoming Primes is not an occurrence that happens outside of a reward from meeting Omni in-character --and even then I can't guarantee it's something you can obtain every time. Regardless, you can't just have Omni do it right as he's summoned. Also I'm not sure what your totals are at the bottom of the sheet but I count 20k as your total OM expenditure. Cirno: Approved. RE: NPC One Stop Shop - James Knight - 01-09-2018 Edited to be sufficient, I believe. RE: NPC One Stop Shop - Mark - 01-11-2018 (01-06-2018, 02:23 PM)Warren Zimmer Wrote: Going to be submitting two NPC Primes for approval here. Here is Ricky. Approved. RE: NPC One Stop Shop - Angel Fisher - 01-11-2018 NPC Name: Jeremy's SQUIP NPC Source: Be More Chill (Musical) B-Lister RE: NPC One Stop Shop - Jade Harley - 01-13-2018 @Angel Fisher: Good to go! RE: NPC One Stop Shop - Albert Wesker - 01-16-2018 NPC Name: HUNK NPC Source: Resident Evil A-, B-, or C-Lister? C-Lister; possibly B-Lister? (Relatively important, but background/minor character with minimal screentime) [spoiler] [/spoiler]
RE: NPC One Stop Shop - Jade Harley - 01-16-2018 I believe C-List will do. Approved! RE: NPC One Stop Shop - Ada Wong - 01-16-2018 NPC Name: Sheva Alomar NPC Source: Resident Evil A-, B-, or C-Lister? B-Lister, I think. Although she was an important and playable protag in RE5, she has yet to appear in any other installments to the series. [spoiler] [/spoiler]
RE: NPC One Stop Shop - ElFailzalot - 01-16-2018 (01-16-2018, 08:01 PM)Ada Wong Wrote: NPC Name: Sheva Alomar
RE: NPC One Stop Shop - The Future Warrior - 01-17-2018 NPC Name: The Everyman NPC Source: A Beginner's Guide to the End of the Universe Are they an A, B, or C-Lister? C-Lister? (Main character, though of an extremely obscure (and extremely silly) series) [spoiler]Character history: The universe ended. The big bang stopped going bang, and started going crunch. Everything was reduced to a singularity. But the collective consciousness of the human race gathered into a single being, who imposed his will upon the decaying universe and stopped it. When there was nothing but a void left, he created some last vestiges of reality, and in the end managed to stop the singularity from consuming everything. It cost him his life, but his body broke apart and scattered, seeding new life so that the once-empty fragment of a universe wasn't so empty anymore. Physical Description: The Everyman is...quite generic, in every sense of the word. He stands out in no way whatsoever, and yet everyone seems to see him slightly differently. His form is so bland and 'average' that it wouldn't be hard to see him as just a featureless stick figure, rendered in such lack of detail that anyone could fill in any details they desired, were he rendered in some form of media with a diverse viewerbase. He stands at an average height, with an average build, with no outstanding features of note. ![]() (Pictured: The Everyman, holding Blazing Hot Betty aloft, standing next to Snuffy the Pooch) Total OM Spent: 11,700 Level: 3 Stats: (Stat Upgrade I + II) ATK: 3 DEF: 3 SPD: 3 TEC: 3 Proficiencies: (3,000); Physical Strength (1000), Ranged (1000) Powers: (2,300); Survival (2000), Basic Super Jumping (300) Moves: (1,800); Repeating Flintlock (300), Blazing Hot Betty (1,200), Siege Hammer (300) Repeating Flintlock (Requires: Ranged) 300 OM (Approval) A simple flintlock pistol, with four barrels and a rotating chamber. Functions as a standard, one shot per barrel weapon. It packs a moderate punch, but isn't terribly accurate, only having any relaible accuracy out to about 15 meters. It takes 6 seconds to reload each individual barrel, and the Everyman carries an extra four rounds with him at any given time; summoning more beyond that takes two seconds per round. In a pinch, he can technically fire anything that he can fit down one of the barrels, not just the rounds specifically made for it. Blazing Hot Betty (Requires: Physical Strength, Ranged, Debuff) 1,200 OM (Approval) Blazing Hot Betty is a unique sword, forged from the Everyman's reality-warping powers of CREATIVITY. Rigged together from the remains of a broken lightbulb, a broken wine bottle, and a magnifying glass, it is a standard blade, just over three feet long from pommel to blade point. It is razor sharp, and serves as a solid melee implement, though it is made of glass, and when struck against other weapons it runs the risk of being damage, or breaking altogether. If the blade does break, it can be repairs, though it takes fifteen seconds to do so. In addition, the blade does have a limited supply of power for its added functions, in the form of a battery. When it is drained completely, it takes fifteen seconds to fully recharge it, which requires full concentration though doesn't prohibit moving to avoid getting clobbered, and consumes stamina equivalent to sprinting up a lengthy flight of stairs. Additional functions of the sword include being able to use the lenses to focus ambient light, heating the blade up to let it deliver an additional punch with its next strike. Focusing the light necessary takes five seconds, and the blade will only remain heated for up to ten seconds, or until a strike is landed, whichever comes first. This doesn't drain from the sword's battery, but does have a small stamina drain attached to it; it's relatively efficient compared to the damage it produces, but overuse will still exhaust the Everyman pretty quickly. The sword can also convert this energy into a blast of light, focused into a laser. It takes 6 seconds to prepare and focus the necessary power, during which time the Everyman must remain stationary. When fired, this burst of energy is no more than three inches in diameter, and can reach up to 30 meters before fizzling out. It has impressive force, and can be sustained up to three seconds before the charge of power runs out. Firing this laser completely drains the batter of the sword with just one shot, and the recoil tends to make the Everyman stumble a little. On top of that, the laser can only be used with a full battery charge, making it...situational, at best, to try and employ. As a final note, the sword can be lit up like a regular lightbulb. It can be used to light dark areas, or switched on as a sudden surprise in a fight to catch an opponent offguard, temporarily blinding them and shrouding the blade in light, making it harder to judge where it is to block it properly. The blinding effect is fairly minimal, only lasting for about three seconds -- it's just like suddenly having a lightbulb turned on in your face. From a full charge, the light function can be maintained for up to thirty seconds before the battery is fully drained. Siege Hammer (Requires: Physical Strength) 300 OM (Approval) The crazy result of the Everyman using his reality-warping CREATIVITY powers to combine a battering ram with a lance. The result is a solid metal shaft, about two meters long, topped with a massive hunk of metal and iron shaped like a massive sledgehammer head, with one striking face capped with a metallic ram's head. The entire head is nearly two and a half feet from one striking face to the other, and forms a rough cylindrical shape just a little over a foot in diameter. The weapon is extremely slow and ponderous, taking nearly two full seconds just to wind up for a swing, but it hits like a runaway freight train if it connects. It is extremely heavy and unwieldy, however, and with every swing (even if it hits), the Everyman is left unbalanced and recovering for a full second afterward, during which he is completely open. Super Moves: (600); T1 Super Attack -- MOTHER. FUCKING. LASER BEAM. (600) MOTHER. FUCKING. LASER BEAM. -- T1 Super Attack (Requires: Ranged) 600 OM (Approval) Identical in every respect to the normal usage of Blazing Hot Betty's laser attack, but far more focused and potent. The beam is narrowed down, to just an inch in diameter, and burns a target for three seconds before exploding, throwing the target back with tremendous force -- and also knocking the Everyman off his feet from the recoil. It's a powerful thing, but it's not the best thing to use wildly, due to energy drain. Assists: (1000); T1 Assist -- Snuffy the Poocch (1000) Snuffy the Pooch -- T1 Assist -- 1000 OM (Approval) The Everyman's loyal canine companion. Appears as a perfectly normal, mundane dog, save for the fact that she is purple. Reasonably intelligent and capable, and determined to protect the Everyman. ATK: 1 DEF: 1 SPD: 2 TEC: 1 Why does this character have to be a prime? The Everyman is...kind of dumb. Really, really dumb. His usual antics are liable to see him end up very dead, very fast; being able to come back from that and keep going is something of a necessity for him. What role do they play in your story? Alternately an antagonist, ally, and source of comic relief. [/spoiler] RE: NPC One Stop Shop - Carmelita - 01-18-2018 Quote:NPC Name: Jean Bison Jean Bison was a prospector in the 1800s who was flash frozen after setting off an avalanche. He defrosted in the modern era, and due to difficulties adapting joined the Klaww Gang to become a shipping tycoon, using their resources to continue to tame the wilderness in the old fashioned way: cutting swathes through the Canadian forest. After his defeat at the hands of the Cooper Gang, Jean was arrested by Carmelita and, after serving a reduced sentence and given education to adapt to the modern era, joined the Environmental Protection Agency. On a rescue mission for young penguins that had gotten lost on a sightseeing tour, he fell into the freezing seawater and was last seen in a block of ice drifting off towards the North Pole. He was given a presumed posthumous award for his bravery. Jean was not, in fact, dead. Once again his constitution persevered against the cold. His frozen form was summoned into the Frozen Fields as a secondary, where he awaits defrosting. RE: NPC One Stop Shop - Carmelita - 01-29-2018 11 day bump RE: NPC One Stop Shop - Jade Harley - 01-31-2018 @ The Future Warrior: The Everyman approved as C-Lister secondary. @ Carmelita: Jean Bison approved as C-Lister secondary. @ Marisa: Approved as a B-Lister PRIME, just be sure to keep this rule in mind, please: Quote:While we don't want to put too many limits on your creativity, NPCs are not there to give your character a game advantage. For example, you cannot create an NPC with a base and then use that base for yourself, circumventing the need to buy one. You cannot create artefacts to give to your NPCs. You cannot make them members of a Faction without approval or otherwise use them as a way to gain cheap influence or fame. If you have NPCs act as a 'deus ex machina' for your character in competitive situations, staff will step in to stop it. Etcetera. RE: NPC One Stop Shop - James Knight - 02-09-2018 NPC Name: Aiden NPC Source: Samurai Jack Character history: The death of Ashi was one that broke Samurai Jack, for the longest time. Aiden was born to an unnamed wife by Samurai Jack because he needed an heir if he was to be the king of his people. As a result of this, Aiden was raised from an early age to be a powerful combatant, but also a skilled leader so that one day he could lead Jack's people, and Jack could commit Seppoku. Little did they know at that time evil would return and Jack would be needed once more to go out into the battle field. As Aiden went through training in Archery, Horseback Riding, and many other skills across the world however, Aiden realized that Jack was getting older. It was not Jack's place to go into battle anymore, it was his own place to go out into battle and face down opponents that Jack had no business battling. Aiden returned home after his training which was much more intensive than what his father had received was done. Sure enough, evil did rear it’s ugly head in the form of an opponent Jack could not handle battling. Warriors who were trained to battle against Samurai, and win. To save Jack, Aiden went and grabbed a weapon from the armory Jack kept, the sword of Mad Jack. Using it, he was able to cut down the opponents. However, he ended up severely injured in the process, and passed away. A copy of his mind was taken by Omni and has ended up here in the Omniverse inside a new body. He has also acquired a collection of blades for some reason, as well as a collection of other items. Physical Description: See picture. Stats: ATK: 3 DEF: 2 SPD: 2 TEC: 4 Starting Proficiencies: Physical Strength - 1000 OM Ranged Proficiency - 1000 OM Starting Powers: Superspeed (1000 OM) Burst Movement (800 OM) Flight (1800 OM) Malleability (1000) Shapeshifting (1400) Basic Enhance Senses (1400 OM) Starting Moves (*require pre-Approval unless basic*): Arsenal of the Champions (1800, Physical Strength, Ranged Proficiency.): Arsenal of the Champions is a move that allows Aiden to summon weapons that he has wielded. At present, he can only summon 5 weapons with this ability that have survived the trip with him into the Omniverse. Summoning any of them takes him about 2-3 seconds to do so. It is also moderately exhausting on his stamina. Also, each weapon has their own requirements.
Why does this character have to be a prime? This is so I can test the character and see if he would be a good full Prime when I get to my third, or decide to swap. What role do they play in your story? This is made to be a separate NPC Prime and have his own story. However, he will be a hero that will fight Warren Zimmer down the line many times, actually. Are they an A, B, or C-Lister? OC RE: NPC One Stop Shop - Clownpiece - 02-09-2018 NPC Name: Meira NPC Source: Touhou 2: Story of Eastern Wonderland A-, B-, or C-Lister? C-List https://i.imgur.com/bEH8IsG.jpg RE: NPC One Stop Shop - Dane Regan - 02-10-2018 NPC Name: Xx_Yandere_Lo♥er_xX NPC Source: OC Character history: Xx_Yandere_Lo♥er_xX had a fairly dull life before the Omniverse - yet still, he was living the dream. After dropping out of college and living in his parent's basement, he dedicated his life to the sword. A weapon he obtained by spending his birthday money. Over the course of a year, he mastered his training and spent the rest of the time watching anime and posting on internet forums. Every day, his mother tried to force him to get a job. And, every day, he was a drain on society. But, should the demons ever come, he would be prepared. Xx_Yandere_Lo♥er_xX may or may not be his real name, but what is for certain is that he has a very strong love for yanderes. The blood. The adorableness. How they'll do anything to be together with their one true love. One day, instead of waking up surrounded by anime body pillows, he woke up alone in an expansive white space after dreaming of a kid wizard giving him a magic ball. He'd shrugged that aside, heading off in a random direction - that place happened to be Coruscant. Little is known about what happened next, but he soon separated himself off from other primes after and found himself living on Tier 3 of Coruscant - in a basement just as before. Perhaps accidentally, his parents were summoned and continued to try and force him to get a job, unaware of his prime status as they swiftly adapted to the new world. But, Xx_Yandere_Lo♥er_xX was not phased by this. He continued his training. He continued watching anime. And he continued posting on internet forums, just waiting for his calling. Waiting for the time to surface and strike. Waiting for a yandere to love. Relevant Dataverse Threads: [PSA] Hecate Rothchild An Unusual Bounty [Email] Xx_Yandere_Lo♥er_xX to Cirno (if this is approved, I'm making that guy a prime instead of a random secondary) Physical Description: Xx_Yandere_Lo♥er_xX is 1.87m tall. Stats: ATK: 3 DEF: 2 SPD: 3 TEC: 7 Starting Proficiencies: Physical Strength- 1000 OM Starting Powers: Suppression - 1000 OM Xx_Yandere_Lo♥er_xX does not need any other powers. Starting Moves (*require pre-Approval unless basic*): Ōdachi (300) Requires: Physical Strength A 68 inch (172cm) long Japanese sword. The blade is 50 inches (127cm) long, and slightly curved (see the picture above). Xx_Yandere_Lo♥er_xX uses this more for individual strong swift attacks than faster flurries of blows. Is he is ever found without it, he can simply draw it out of thin air from an invisible sheath held in his hand. This requires 2 of seconds of light focus where he can move and act as usual, but can't use other moves. This isn't interrupted if he takes damage unless it's a large amount (like a super attack). After drawing his sword like this, he can't do it again for an hour. Starting Items: Mobile Dataverse Device - 100 OM Communicator - 200 OM Starting Unlocks: Stat Upgrade V - 25000 OM Parent's Basement, Tier 3 of Coruscant: Base - 1000 OM VR Station - 500 OM Level: 6 Spent OM: 29100 Why does this character have to be a prime? As a secondary, Xx_Yandere_Lo♥er_xX would never have managed to ascend to his true strength. He's no pushover. What role do they play in your story? An antagonist on Coruscant. Namely for Warren Zimmer at the moment. Are they an A, B, or C-Lister? (If you don't know what this means, you didn't read the manual) - if they are original, just put 'OC' here. OC RE: NPC One Stop Shop - Alex - 02-10-2018 Did Warren request you do this? RE: NPC One Stop Shop - Dane Regan - 02-10-2018 @Alex: No. He didn't. RE: NPC One Stop Shop - Alex - 02-10-2018 For the moment, a secondary will have to do. I don't feel comfortable at the moment setting the precedent of letting people create prime npcs for the sole purpose of unwantedly antagonizing other characters. RE: NPC One Stop Shop - Dane Regan - 02-10-2018 @Alex: If I asked Warren's opinion of him being a prime once he gets back online, would it influence your decision? As a side note, after my first couple of posts on the Dataverse, Warren OOC asked me to keep trying to antagonise his character with "Xx_Yandere_Lo♥er_xX" by "spamming the thread". He just never requested I make this app. Further sidenote, if a fight does happen, I'll ask him if he wants a 'scripted win' or to have it graded. |