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Re: Secondary Saga Interactions - Gildarts - 08-16-2015
Jak Mar Wrote:Another question of the like: What is the arrowhead made of?
Either wood or steel
Re: Secondary Saga Interactions - Guu - 08-16-2015
Couldn't help myself. xD
Raw Onion laying down the law.
Re: Secondary Saga Interactions - Gildarts - 08-16-2015
Hopefully I'll be able to write a post tomorrow after work @G1, it won't be until later, because I'm going to the beach after.
Re: Secondary Saga Interactions - Smith - 08-17-2015
Group One: I have started a post.
Re: Secondary Saga Interactions - Smith - 08-17-2015
And I have posted. Didn't do much except detail my escape from the fog. DID describe our area as a hallway.
Re: Secondary Saga Interactions - Ganondorf - 08-17-2015
Also, I've been doing First Person since this thing kicked off. I'm wondering how people are receiving it. I'm kinda going for a internal monologue/guy-telling-a-story-to-his-pals thing. I was considering going back to my tried and true Third Person, but I think it might be difficult to do a character like Urg in that way, just due to how he interacts with the world. Any comments, critiques, and suggestions would be welcome and appreciated.
Re: Secondary Saga Interactions - Gildarts - 08-17-2015
Ganondorf Wrote:Also, I've been doing First Person since this thing kicked off. I'm wondering how people are receiving it. I'm kinda going for a internal monologue/guy-telling-a-story-to-his-pals thing. I was considering going back to my tried and true Third Person, but I think it might be difficult to do a character like Urg in that way, just due to how he interacts with the world. Any comments, critiques, and suggestions would be welcome and appreciated.
I like the warm bodies effect that Urg captures with his essence and narration, but also the reflection from his perspective is refreshing, satiating, and original.
(I may just give you a more in depth one later or on skype)
Re: Secondary Saga Interactions - Gildarts - 08-17-2015
Hey everyone, just caught up on your posts. Everyone is doing wonderful, keep up all the great writing
Re: Secondary Saga Interactions - Thaal Sinestro - 08-17-2015
Ganondorf Wrote:Also, I've been doing First Person since this thing kicked off. I'm wondering how people are receiving it. I'm kinda going for a internal monologue/guy-telling-a-story-to-his-pals thing. I was considering going back to my tried and true Third Person, but I think it might be difficult to do a character like Urg in that way, just due to how he interacts with the world. Any comments, critiques, and suggestions would be welcome and appreciated.I like it a lot. I also don't think that the character could WORK in 3rd person? Everything that gives the character depth is in the split between his thoughts and actions, his mind and his body. It's a fun thing to play with, in a similar way to the way that Krieg is. It's cooool.
Re: Secondary Saga Interactions - Jak Mar - 08-17-2015
I'm curious. I want a opinion of whether Jan works in 3rd person or 1st person.
Re: Secondary Saga Interactions - Roger Smith - 08-17-2015
Post is up. Crow contributed approximately nothing, apologies for that.
Crow sustained an axe wound across the face during his retreat, and has a bloody wound on his temple and a minor concussion from the falling rocks upon entry to the temple.
Re: Secondary Saga Interactions - Jak Mar - 08-17-2015
Post is up, and Jan is forcing himself to ask for help. He's not one to ask for assistance as needed but he'll do it now.
Re: Secondary Saga Interactions - Zack Fair - 08-17-2015
Ganondorf Wrote:Also, I've been doing First Person since this thing kicked off. I'm wondering how people are receiving it. I'm kinda going for a internal monologue/guy-telling-a-story-to-his-pals thing. I was considering going back to my tried and true Third Person, but I think it might be difficult to do a character like Urg in that way, just due to how he interacts with the world. Any comments, critiques, and suggestions would be welcome and appreciated.
Writing style depends on the character in my opinion, and I think it's very well suited to Urg.
Anyways...Christa, Urg, Bucky, and Abner are now running the gauntlet.
Re: Secondary Saga Interactions - Yu Kanda - 08-18-2015
Moving took a bit longer and allot more work then expected....but today is my resting day so i will put up a nice post today ^^
Re: Secondary Saga Interactions - Ganondorf - 08-18-2015
Zack Fair Wrote:Writing style depends on the character in my opinion, and I think it's very well suited to Urg.
Anyways...Christa, Urg, Bucky, and Abner are now running the gauntlet.
Yay... running. Just what I'm good at.
Re: Secondary Saga Interactions - Gildarts - 08-18-2015
Adam, your most recent post is wonderful.
Re: Secondary Saga Interactions - Gildarts - 08-18-2015
To group 1 probably my last post, but if you see, I kind of set Urg off as a booby trap. (because epicness and he's ALIVE -sort of-) Hope you don't mind ;D (run for your bloody lives)
anyway, Christa is injured but not dead, Abner and Bucky are in suitable condition, where they could either run and leave Christa to be eaten. "Choices"
[spoiler]you may cover it in your posts, but a trap that contains Urg would be a solution to not kill him, or a tunnel that separates him from the group. ANYTHING but kill my zombie friend.[/spoiler]
Happy writing!
Re: Secondary Saga Interactions - Yu Kanda - 08-18-2015
Working on a group 2 story atm
Re: Secondary Saga Interactions - Roger Smith - 08-18-2015
Crow has strapped on his leader boots and gotten group 4 moving, finally. Apologies that took so long.
More piratical term references:
-- A "picaroon" is a scoundrel
-- To "dance the hempen jig" means to die, or more literally, be executed or hang
-- "buckoes" means "pals", essentially
-- "aft" means "behind" or "backward"
-- "deadlights" is another term for eyes
Feel free to slap me if any of these were extremely obvious!
Re: Secondary Saga Interactions - Yu Kanda - 08-18-2015
Group 2..Will crank out another post for klaud tomorrowbefore the deadline. I will pickup where the previous poster left off or continue where i left off if no one has inspiration.