Minato Namikaze Wrote:Toy Box Girl's move could only copy a move 'permanently' if it costed the same amount that was spent on the move itself (which was 300 OM), meaning that she could only have 1 move 'permanently' copied at a time and this move could be over written at any time. Plus, she must have the Powers/ Proficiencies that the move would usually require to actually utilize said move. Which meant that she'd need to go and buy any said Powers or Proficiencies she needed to permanently copy a move.

Your move has no such stipulations and if you did want to do this, you'd need to have a set limit on how many moves you can permanently copy and would therefore need to spend more OM on Powers/ Proficiencies and this move to permanently copy any/more moves (Going off of the requirements for TBG's Move and the reasons it was approved in the first place).

Shade Wrote:Shadow Puppetry (Require Remote Control Prof. and Foresight) - 300 OM
After physically strike a foe, Shade can summon a replica of them, gaining their strength to a degree. These replicas function as extensions of Shade's own body, taking as much concentration to move as a limb. Shade can maintain up to 2 replicas with minimal detriment to her concentration, with each additional replica adding strain to Shade's concentration to maintain all replicas, up to 5 maximum. Maintaining 5 replicas takes all her focus, and to do so she must remain rooted and cannot use any of her own moves, only those mimicked by the replicas.

As these replicas are extensions of Shade, they cannot act if Shade cannot command them. Essentially, if Shade is being mentally trick or immobilized so that she cannot act with her own body, she cannot act with the replicas. If Shade is knocked unconscious or put to sleep for even a split second, all replicas are dispelled. Shade can also dispel a replica at anytime, disappearing back into the shadows.

All replicas provide Shade with additional visual information, allowing her a larger field of vision. (Anything a replica can see with it's eyes, Shade can also see as if they were her own eyes.) All replicas can use, and be the source of, any of Shade's moves.

A replica forms from shadows, being summoned one of the following ways: The replica steps out of nearby shadows within 5 feet of shade, as if it had been waiting there the whole time, OR The replica steps out from directly behind Shade, as if it had been waiting there the whole time.

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Shade Wrote:Shadow Puppetry (Require Remote Control Prof. and Foresight) - 600 OM
After physically strike a foe, Shade can summon a replica of them. These replicas function as extensions of Shade's own body, taking as much concentration to move as a limb. Shade can maintain up to 2 replicas with minimal detriment to her concentration, with each additional replica adding strain to Shade's concentration to maintain all replicas, up to 5 maximum. Maintaining 5 replicas takes all her focus, and to do so she must remain rooted and cannot herself use any move or power, only the replicas can; This includes any of Shade's moves as well as any she has Mimicked.

To summon a replica(s), Shade charges for up to 10 seconds, summoning 1 replica every 2 seconds until the desired number is reached. If Shade is interrupted during this time, the charge is stopped in it tracks, leaving Shade with the current amount summoned. As Shade is charging, replicas summoned by the current attempt can begin to defend Shade, allowing her to continue charging uninterrupted, but they can only defend as Shade cannot concentrate on offense and replica summoning.(I can add this additional clause if needed: If Shade wishes to summon more replicas while she already has any summoned, she must charge for 2 seconds for each replica currently out before more begin to form. ie: To summon more replicas with two already out, she must charge for 4 seconds before any more form.)

As these replicas are extensions of Shade, they cannot act if Shade cannot command them. Essentially, if Shade is being mentally trick or immobilized so that she cannot act with her own body, she cannot act with the replicas. If Shade is knocked unconscious or put to sleep for even a split second, all replicas are dispelled. Shade can also dispel a replica at anytime, disappearing back into the shadows.

All replicas provide Shade with additional visual information, allowing her a larger field of vision. (Anything a replica can see with it's eyes, Shade can also see as if they were her own eyes.) All replicas can use, and be the source of, any of Shade's moves.

A replica forms from shadows, being summoned one of the following ways: The replica steps out of nearby shadows within 5 feet of shade, as if it had been waiting there the whole time, OR The replica steps out from directly behind Shade, as if it had been waiting there the whole time.

I just want to address this part first.

So, After looking over this while I'm feeling better and more refreshed. I came to realize that being able to summon up to five shadow replicas of people would most likely count as a variable move. Fortunately, I think you could just add a charge time which says that the longer shade charges, the more shadows are summoned and that if shade breaks the charge time, or an opponent stops her charge time, Shade is limited to the use of the amount of shadows that had time to summon. The move would Cost 600 OM but I think it's fair. Now the charge time is up to you, but I would recommend something like 10 - 15 seconds (at minimum). This would mean that 1 shadow would be summoned every 2 - 3 seconds. I think this is appropriate because these shadows seem pretty strong.

Another thing I would fix is removing the part about gaining their strength, I know what you mean, but it may be a little confusing for other people and doesn't actually need to be there.

Also, make the part about only being able to use the copied moves a little more clear. I assume you mean that shade can only command the shadows to utilize copied moves (because if shade could do it while she is maintaining 5 shadow copies, that would break the staying still and concentrating limitation you put on yourself). So just make that part a little more clear.

Of course, if another Mod/ Admin want's to overrule me on this, then I'm sure they will. I am, after all, the baby staff at the moment [insert picture of baby minato here].

Shade Wrote:Your Nightmares are What You Make Them (Requires Mimic) - 300 OM
Any attack Shade experiences a foe use can be copied and used by Shade and her replicas. Shade and all currently summoned replicas can replicate these attacks.

This attack is performed with the same technical ability as a move copied by Mimic, and can only be used if Shade has a replica of it's original user summoned (To use a Move originally from a certain foe, Shade must have a replica of that foe summoned to use it in any capacity). Shade must also have all Powers and Proficiencies needed to perform the move. Any move(s) can be copied as long as the combined OM of the copied moves is less than or equal to the amount of OM spent on this move.

Your Biggest Fear is Yourself (Requires Shapeshifting and Suppression) - 300 OM
By shrouding herself in the power of a replica of a past foe, Shade can modulate her appearance and power signature to make it hard of others to notice that she's impersonating someone. Those with Sensory Powers would have an idea that something is off about her, depending the difference between her TEC and theirs.

Quote:Combat Shotgun - 600 OM - Requires Ranged Proficiency

A pump shotgun, the weapon of choice for Imperial Guard drop troops, sappers and law enforcers. While not particularly adorned or specialized in any manner, the mechanism for the firearm is extremely simple and reliable, with malfunctions such as jams being an extreme rarity, even in the most hostile environments. While commonly loaded loaded with eight buckshot shells at a time, the shotgun can also be loaded with large brass-coated slugs, trading spread and loading speed for extra accuracy and damage.

Quote:Cluster Grenade - 300 OM - Requires Ranged Proficiency and Area Attack Proficiency

A commonly used anti-personnel explosive, the Mark VI cluster bomb can be a brutally effective tool when used against large groups of infantry, or as a harassment tool against armoured vehicles. Simplistic in concept, the explosive functions in much the same way as a normal fragmentation grenade, though with shells of highly concentrated napam jelly dispersed throughout the explosive materials that make up much of the grenade's structure. The resulting ignition causes the small projectiles to catch alight and be launched in across the 10 meter effective range of the blast, easily passing through wood and hide, though blocked rather easily by steel or concrete. While such a weapon is potentially devastating in the right hands, the results of an early ignition or a poor throw are obviously punishing.

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Shade Wrote:Your Nightmares are What You Make Them (Requires Mimic) - 300 OM
Any attack Shade experiences a foe use can be copied and used by Shade and her replicas. Shade and all currently summoned replicas can replicate these attacks.

This attack is performed with the same technical ability as a move copied by Mimic, and can only be used if Shade has a replica of it's original user summoned (To use a Move originally from a certain foe, Shade must have a replica of that foe summoned to use it in any capacity). Shade must also have all Powers and Proficiencies needed to perform the move. Any move(s) can be copied as long as the combined OM of the copied moves is less than or equal to the amount of OM spent on this move.

I will Approve Your Nightmares are What you make them because you are pretty much purchasing moves. Just make sure that you keep an updated list of moves in your roster (under this move). Also make sure to remember that you can only copy moves to the capacity of OM spent on this move itself. So at the moment, you can only copy one, basic, move permanently. and if you want to overwrite that move, make sure to update the list when you do so.

Shade Wrote:Shadow of a Memory (Requires Telepathy, Insight, Basic Fusion, Mimic, and "Your Nightmares are What You Make Them") - 300 OM
Shade fuses with a target and, if they willing open their mind for her to enter, she can dig through their memories and view any of the past fights they've had with other Primes. Using her powers of Insight along with her ability to Mimic the moves of others, Shade can store any moves or powers her fusion partner has witness during combat with another Prime. These can be added to roster of moves stored by "Your Nightmares are What You Make Them", but follow the same rules for storage as any she witnessed herself.