(09-02-2016, 03:59 PM)ElFailzalot Wrote: Grappling Hook: Picking over minor details here, but at what speed does the hook reel in again once it latches onto a target? And in the event the rope is broken, is he able to summon a new one or repair it on the fly (and if so, how long does it take) or is it out of commission for the rest of the battle?

(09-02-2016, 05:25 PM)Illidan Wrote:

(09-02-2016, 03:59 PM)ElFailzalot Wrote: Grappling Hook: Picking over minor details here, but at what speed does the hook reel in again once it latches onto a target? And in the event the rope is broken, is he able to summon a new one or repair it on the fly (and if so, how long does it take) or is it out of commission for the rest of the battle?

The speed varies depending on the target. Something light like a gun or sword would return at the same speed it flies out at (arrow speed). If the object is heavier than him, he would travel towards it around the same speed. Anything between those two (ie. an item that would draw back to him, but not particularly light) would slow by degrees as the weight went up. If the rope breaks, it's out of commission until he has downtime to repair it.

Quote:Dark Magic Blast – 600 OM (Requires Ranged Proficiency, Remote Control Proficiency, Ranged Materialize Proficiency, Homing Proficiency)
Sombra can fire a concentrated beam of reddish-black magic from his horn. This can take the form of a single beam or appear as any other ranged weapon Sombra imagines. Sombra can put more energy into each shot - the strength of which relates directly to how physically and mentally drained he is after the attack. If he chooses to create a Dark Magic weapon, it must be roughly the size of a pistol for a weak shot, or the size of a rifle for a charged shot. These weapons and projectiles will immediately dissipate upon his breaking his concentration for any reason. The bigger the weapon the more taxing it is to create. These  also home in on an opponent when fired,  meaning they can do some serious harm because they’d track an individual for about 20 seconds. The weak shots look like Tennis Balls but the charged shots appear to be volley-ball sized. Both of them share a similar aesthetic of a black energy sphere that's mottled with bits of red and purple. Sometimes the shots can even appear to be crystal shards that he fires from his horn at his opponents. 

Quote: Wrote:Dark Magic Tethers  – 600 OM (Requires Debuff Proficiency, Requires Ranged Proficiency, Remote Control Proficiency, Ranged Materialize Proficiency)
In the same way that Sombra can manipulate objects in creative ways, he can also manipulate characters. Iron chains, ribbons of light, crushing snakes can all be used. In general, these tethers always accomplish the same goal: they slow a character down and they immobilize their arms. However, these shackles can be broken just like any other item: hitting, cutting and ripping free in a feat of strength are all options. Additionally, if he loses his concentration, the tethers immediately dissipate. The more energy he puts into these tethers, the harder they are to break but the more physically and mentally exhausted he becomes.When a Dark Magic Tether has successfully attached itself to an target, Sombra can then use that tether to move the target, be it Secondary or Prime. The bond can firmly grab, but not crush his opponent. The bond can move the target off of the ground and in all the cardinal directions. The Tether can be broken as usual. These just appear but are not summoned from him. Due to this he can use multiple spells at the same time. 

Quote: Wrote:Dark Magic Construct – 600 OM (Requires Ranged Proficiency, Remote Control Proficiency, Ranged Materialize Proficiency)
Sombra can summon objects with his magic to interact with and manipulate objects at range. These manipulations are analogous to the things that a person with two large hands could feasibly complete (moving, pushing, pulling, pressing, turning, etc).
These objects have superficial images associated with them, always in the form of an object that is completing the task. If the object is grabbing and moving another thing, it will have a "grasping" mechanic, be it a hand, a mouth, a clamp, a claw, etc. These images are purely illusory, and the strength of the object is always the same. That means that a Construct shaped like a hand and a Construct shaped like a crowbar are equally good at prying something open and etc. These grabbing constructs appear as a tendril of rope-like light that materializes near Sombra’s horn, ending in the chosen 'grabber'. They can extend as far as Sombra’s concentration allows, but the longer the grabber, the more easily it is broken.

While these objects are illusory and can fulfill only one purpose, they can be attacked, damaged and destroyed. The more damage they take, the more strain it puts on Sombra’s mind. The more energy he puts into these objects, the harder they are to break but the more physically and mentally exhausted he becomes. These objects will immediately dissipate upon his breaking his concentration for any reason. Maximum range of ~30 meters (~100 feet)

(08-30-2016, 01:01 PM)Eda Wrote: Shining Victory: I understand the slowness but I was more looking for a number. Maybe 1 MPH or something? Just trying to remove any ambiguity. So 75 feet is the maximum size at the 50 foot version is just if it’s not charged to full power? Also bear in mind that with an attack this large the damage will be watered down a good deal vs. a smaller attack that hits only one thing.

I know that going into this , retooling it for final approval 

Move : Love Love Shining Victory ( T1 super ) ( Requires ranged proficiency , homing proficiency , area attack proficiency ) ( 600 om 
) Description : A 50 foot in diameter ball meant for taking out a mob of enemies all at once , made of pink light energy 
Speed : Very slow - 10mph 
Damage : Large
Stamina drain : Moderate
Distance : Far but looses effectiveness after 45 feet 
Focus needed to cast and keep on target
Can not be used while moving
Can not be charged while moving 


Drawbacks : The large size of this attack makes it incredibly slow and easy to dodge 

~ 

Move two : 


Name : Eda Special combo ( 300 ) ( Requires strength proficiency ) 
Description : A combination of charged strikes , finishing the combination with a blast of lightning 
Damage : Moderate
Stamina drain : Low
This attack is a melee combination and could only be used at close range 

Drawbacks : Eda's low str and def will make this attack hurt her almost as much as what she is hitting normally

Desco Wrote:Not applicable. I'm not sure what you even want to know by in motion for this move given that it is a specific set of movements required to activate. Concentration has no application here, Prinny reflexively fires a beam if you hit him on the head hard enough. Probably could be easily used in conjunction with throwing spoons since while landing on Prinny she can be actually focused on aiming and throwing spoons. An advantage of using two characters in an attack, and has nothing to do with the move description.

Quote:These speed descriptions are getting out of hand especially as a move for Enel just passed muster without mentioning speed at all.

(09-03-2016, 12:36 AM)Mark Wrote:

(08-30-2016, 01:01 PM)Eda Wrote: Shining Victory: I understand the slowness but I was more looking for a number. Maybe 1 MPH or something? Just trying to remove any ambiguity. So 75 feet is the maximum size at the 50 foot version is just if it’s not charged to full power? Also bear in mind that with an attack this large the damage will be watered down a good deal vs. a smaller attack that hits only one thing.

I know that going into this , retooling it for final approval 

Move : Love Love Shining Victory ( T1 super ) ( Requires ranged proficiency , homing proficiency , area attack proficiency ) ( 600 om 
) Description : A 50 foot in diameter ball meant for taking out a mob of enemies all at once , made of pink light energy 
Speed : Very slow - 10mph 
Damage : Large
Stamina drain : Moderate
Distance : Far but looses effectiveness after 45 feet 
Focus needed to cast and keep on target
Can not be used while moving
Can not be charged while moving 


Drawbacks : The large size of this attack makes it incredibly slow and easy to dodge 

~ 

Move two : 


Name : Eda Special combo ( 300 ) ( Requires strength proficiency ) 
Description : A combination of charged strikes , finishing the combination with a blast of lightning 
Damage : Moderate
Stamina drain : Low
This attack is a melee combination and could only be used at close range 

Drawbacks : Eda's low str and def will make this attack hurt her almost as much as what she is hitting normally

Shining Victory is approved.

For the Special Combo, is the lightning bolt thrown from the hand or something, or does it just strike from the sky? If it's a projectile you'll need to list its dimensions and range (I'm assuming since it's described as lightning that the speed is comparable to like, lightning from a storm. If not, I'd list that too).

Response : Would be a combo ending palm blast of lighting , the speed on this would be exactly that . Think naruto's rasengan , as for the dimensions it might be an n/a since its a single target strike . I might still need to refine it yet , if so let me know

working on one last thing but got my second big move so am happy <3 

(09-03-2016, 11:43 PM)Weiss Schnee Wrote: Infested slashes - 300 OM.
Kerrigan's nails have long since hardened and changed since her infestation into a zerg. they have since been altered into something more capable of rending flesh and tearing bone - a set of inch-long hardened points that can easily cut through vulnerable areas of an opponent's body. These claws are also quite durable - Kerrigan's nails have enough resilience to actually allow her to stop blades or similar weaponry without breaking. while they are sharp and fast, their length limits both her range and her ability to damage an opponent with them, especially due to the fact that they are only truly sharpened at the very tips. Kerrigan can attempt to slash an opponent with her nails, but it's likely to leave little more than a shallow, cosmetic line of red on an opponent. a proper stab allows her to do considerably more damage, on the other hand.

(09-04-2016, 02:04 PM)Nealaphh Wrote: A Wash of Rose Petals (Requires Physical Proficiency, Area Shield Proficiency, Advanced Telekinesis, Basic Enhanced Senses, Time Manipulation) - 300 OM

Nealaphh swiftly envelopes its body in a thin barrier of telekinetic force and takes a defensive stance, focusing on all motion and thought taking place around him. It takes about two seconds for Nealaphh to prepare this stance, but once active, is able to deflect most if not all basic (unnamed) melee attacks targeted towards him by swatting the blows away with his shielded limbs. Since he has a full circle of awareness, he can reflexively block attacks even coming from behind him. Nealaphh also speeds up its perception of time while using this technique, so the number of attacks directed at him doesn't matter, so long as none of them are inherently faster than his body's actual ability to intercept.

Any attack that has more than a basic amount of force put behind it will breach the telekinetic envelope and cause the normal amount of damage that Nealaphh would have received if it hadn't prepared this move. Since it is such an intensive use of Nealaphh's skills, he can only sustain this defensive stance for up to six seconds before needing to rest for a full minute. It cannot use Time Manipulation or Telekinesis during this time. Nealaphh cannot move while deflecting the blows, and most concentrate on this move while using it. Additionally, it cannot use any other move while deflecting.

(09-05-2016, 05:30 AM)Eda Wrote: Move : Eda chan burst form ( t1 powered up form ) ( 1000 om )
Description : An attack focused form , incredible power but taxing on the body

Atk +2
def+1
spd +1
Tec + 1

(-1 sp per post in this form )

(09-05-2016, 05:47 AM)Daniel Wrote:

(09-05-2016, 05:30 AM)Eda Wrote: Move : Eda chan burst form ( t1 powered up form ) ( 1000 om )
Description : An attack focused form , incredible power but taxing on the body

Atk +2
def+1
spd +1
Tec + 1

(-1 sp per post in this form )

Is there anything else to this transformation? Does her appearance change at all?

Power ups and transformations have a set sp cost per post, so there's no need to list it.