Strazio Rockwell Wrote:Solar Suplex - How long can he pin the target? And how far can he leap away? I would also add that this move would be pretty tiring for him to pull off if he decides to pin them.

Ludwig von Koopa Wrote:Ack, I knew I forgot something, but hey we all make mistakes, so no big.

Quote:For Lunam Sonate, I meant to add in the Healing but I've messed up there. As the terms for the damage he can heal, it would be enough to heal severe wounds received in battle (but not to the extreme like dismemberment; in fact, I have a different move for that in mind.)

For Thunder Klaw, yes the voltage can be varied in the amount of time that he charges. In this case, I can see the voltage being stronger than it was with Static due to the amount of energy Ludwig will put into it. The final thing is I can see this attack being slower in execution than his Koopa Swipe.

For Static, the charge time is a window of several seconds and the range of the attack can reach out far but narrow since it's a simple attack.

Ludwig von Koopa Wrote:All right. Understood. We'll let the big man handle that. In the meanwhile:

Static (requires Homing Proficiency) - Ludwig channels his prowess through his claws, formulating electrical energy in a window of seconds before he sends it over to inflict damage to a target. Depending on the amount of voltage he has will be the factor of how severe the damage will inflict. (300)

Thunder Klaw (requires Physical Strength/Debuff Proficiency) - An alternate yet more powerful and slower variation of the Koopa Swipe empowered by magic. With the same timing as Static, Ludwig charges his claws with energy before he pierces into his target and it has a chance that it may cause paralysis as the severity of the attack is varied by amount of voltage that he has available. (600)

Makoto Yuki Wrote:

Strazio Rockwell Wrote:So I would just try and narrow down the specifics of it. So the default mode would be a sphere the size of a human that can be materialized up to 45 meters away. The explosion isn't very powerful, but it is materialized instantly allowing Makoto to use it as a harassing tool. Then try and specify the secondary effect, range, area of effect, etc. etc.

Alright, how does splitting it into two basic moves sound?

-Agidyne (300)(Ranged Proficiency, Area Attack Proficiency, Ranged Materialize Proficiency):
[spoiler]A sphere of fire that explodes into existence remotely from the caster. It has a maximum effective range of 45 meters (~150 feet). The explosion itself is not very powerful, but its usage is instantaneous. The sphere's size is enough to engulf a human of average height, but it's only powerful enough to harass most foes with an adequate defense.

This skill may be used by Makoto himself, or by a persona which uses the move, then promptly disappears.[/spoiler]

-Maragidyne (300)(Ranged Proficiency, Area Attack Proficiency, Ranged Materialize Proficiency):
[spoiler]An application of Agidyne where it is cast multiple times at the same instance. Every individual explosion retains its full power, and as such it is tiring to use this. Its usefulness lies in dealing with large amounts of cannon fodder, catching speedier enemies and flushing out hidden targets.

This skill may be used by Makoto himself, or by a persona which uses the move, then promptly disappears.[/spoiler]

I think this is a more organized approach to achieving the same end result?

Quote:Mana Arrow (300 OM). Ranged Prof, Debuff Prof
Awoor has a special item which she can summon forth - a bow of energy which she wields with her horns "hands", which can fire arrows of energy. These arrows cause no physical harm, instead, upon impact, they cause fatigue, by draining the victim's stamina. The drain typically causes a sudden loss of fatigue as if they had just made a short sprint. The victim recovers from the loss of fatigue as he/she normally would (resting or just waiting). The arrow can travel up to 100m away if aimed diagonally upwards for distance

Quote:Specter Claws (Requires Physical Strength) - 300 OM
Shade augments her host's limbs with sharp claws, tipping each finger and toe. These blade are invisible to the naked eye, but have shadows as if they were actually there. Individuals with Enhanced Senses can see the claws on the host's limbs with increasing clarity depending on their skill. Those with a Mastery of their Enhanced Senses can clearly see the translucent claws.
//Claws are invisible to those with out Enhanced Senses or Basic. Those with Advanced can see them slightly if they're looking for them. Those with Master can see them as clear as they would a shard of glass.//

Quote:Shadow Boxing (Requires Area Attack Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency) 300 OM
By tapping into the shadows of those around her, Shade can level the playing field.

Any living creature with a shadow affected by this is now physically linked to their shadow for the duration of the fight. Any damage taken by the shadow affects the shadow's owner in the same way. (Gunshot to the shadow's shoulder = Gunshot wound on the shoulder of the shadow's owner.) This affect makes it harder and more mentally taxing for one to successfully dodge or block attacks, as they now have to defend their shadow as well.

An owner's shadow resists damage as much as the owner does (Attacks on the shadow and the resulting damage is calculated as if the owner was hit directly). Limbs cannot be removed in one hit from attacks on shadows (You cannot make a clean slice through the arm of the shadow and expect the owner's arm to fall off, although the same amount of damage is taken).

Shadow Boxing is cast like this: Her host starts with their hands centered in front of their chest, palms towards each other. They move their hands down and turn them out, pushing out away from her body to the left and right. This sends a spherical wave of black energy outwards, with her as the center-point. This turns the world black, and any living thing with a shadow white, staying that way until the wave reaches it's maximum radial range of 20 meters. The hand signal takes 1 second to perform; the area of affect takes 3 seconds to reach it's max range. If user is struck down before the sphere reaches maximum range, it stops where it is, and all targets hit by it will still be affected.

"With a shadow," refers to anyone who has not had their shadow removed by Shade. All individuals affected by this will have a their shadow's color increased to pitch black, regardless of actual light levels.

//Pros: Affected individuals have the same weakness as Shade now. Affected individuals must not protect their body and shadow from attack to avoid being hurt.//
//Cons: Affects friends and foes alike. Effect is indiscriminate.//

The Black Spark (Requires Debuff Proficiency, Mimic) - 300 OM
Tapping into herself and a target's shadow, Shade can swap strength with the opponent.
Shade and her target 'swap' moves. Shade can now freely use the target's moves, and the target can use hers, but both are now unable to use their own. Shade and her target are as skilled in these new moves as if they had Mimicked them. This lasts for 10 minutes, or until Shade or her target are knocked unconscious.

The Black Spark is cast like this: Shade's host grabs both of the target's hands in hers. Black lightning chargers up in each persons right forearm for half a second, then shoots down their arm, spiraling around it, and then down the opponent's left forearm, stopping at each one's shoulder. This takes 2 seconds in total to complete. Shade must maintain a grip on the target's hands until completion or this has no effect.

Negative Space - Tier 1 Super Defense (Requires Area Shield Proficiency) - 600 OM
By taking a step back and bring the host's forearms up to block, Shade can absorb an attack entirely by directing it into negative space in the world that shadows create by existing. When she does, a large, black, shadowy creature rises from the ground in front of her, arms open to 'catch' the attack (if it's a ranged attack), or knock the attacker away 3 meters (if a physical attack).
[spoiler][/spoiler]

Shadow Jumper (Requires Basic Fusion, Symbiosis, Telepathy) - 300 OM
Shade preys on the mind of a weakened foe, convincing them to let her 'shadow' them. They let her temporarily take their body and use it as her own. When used on a weakened target with less TEC than Shade, She can convince them to fuse with her, allowing her access to their strength and remaining SP. Lasts until the both parties are to weak to continue fighting (Depletion of SP), or if they are knocked unconscious, ejecting Shade from her forced host.