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RE: Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic - Jack Darby - 04-02-2017
Turning this quest in: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=7792&pid=96482#pid96482
Is it long enough?
RE: Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic - Amaterasu - 04-05-2017
Okay then! I am hereby turning in Cold is the Void, the Frozen Fields Void Quest.
As a note to the quest-grader: I recommend reading the entire thread to understand the bigger picture, and would be happy to provide background if it is needed. The above link links to the 4th post of the thread where the actual quest begins.
The word count is kept track of at the bottom of the post, I used MS Word and Google Docs. I hope not to have made any errors. If I did not, the total wordcount clocks in at 29.542, so... be sure to bring some time and a cup of tea if you want to read it in one sitting :frogpipe:
It should be noted that I did purposedly not mention Sapphirion and the Blue Dragonflight yet even though they are part of the Void Quest. In order to avoid writing myself into a corner that I will be stuck in if the quest is not deemed to be sufficient as-is, I will write about them in later posts. If the quest is approved as it is I will of course still include them to some amount! But if it is not, I will have something to write about - Amaterasu's, Oki's, Fiara's and Urist's final challenge to get to the Void Gate, so to speak.
RE: Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic - Jade Harley - 04-07-2017
@Warren Zimmer:
Quote:The Sorcerer’s Apprentice
Location: Dalaran, Camelot
For those with magical potential, there are many avenues of progression in the wonderland known as Dalaran. If you prostrate yourself before the council as a Prime seeking to help the Kingdom, you may be lucky enough to be assigned a Master, one of the senior practitioners of Dalaran. The Master in question will depend on your particular gifts or personality. As an apprentice, your day-to-day life may involve intense, harsh schooling, running strange errands, or partaking in even more unusual training activities. If you can prove yourself able to adapt and learn, you will earn both the respect of the High Council and the attention of the Kingdom. As an official part of the Mages' Guild, you will also be able to take on your own apprentices and have a say in city affairs.
It was a good effort, but you have failed this quest. While your word count was above the minimum requirement, you did not follow the guidelines of the quest.
1. The location was supposed to be Dalaran, not a random temple in the woods.
2. Warren did not ask for knowledge because he was a Prime seeking to help the Kingdom.
3. He did not have a clearly defined Master who was a senior practicioner at Dalaran, and stabbing a sorceress through the chest (even if she was not actually slain) is never a good idea, especially if you're seeking to get on their good side.
4. You mentioned a Mages' Institute, but not the Mages' Guild. This is only a minor mistake, but it seems to suggest that you did not read the quest description carefully.
Thank you for your patience!
RE: Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic - Jack Darby - 04-10-2017
Requesting that Arle get a writing bonus for her exceptional in my opinion posts in: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=7829 which are part of a storyline where Warren guides her to Dalaran. This is the first part of it.
RE: Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic - Jade Harley - 04-10-2017
(04-10-2017, 01:49 PM)Warren Zimmer Wrote: Requesting that Arle get a writing bonus for her exceptional in my opinion posts in: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=7829 which are part of a storyline where Warren guides her to Dalaran. This is the first part of it.
You both qualify for a Participation Bonus! Yay!
Arle Nadja - 208.13 OM
Warren Zimmer - 117.67
I'll update your logs in a sec! Logs updated!
RE: Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic - The Vision - 04-13-2017
http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=6548
Submitting a Complicated Business for Group Bonus.
RE: Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic - Jack Darby - 04-22-2017
http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=7840&pid=97780#pid97780 Turning this in for a bonus for Arle.
RE: Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic - Jade Harley - 04-22-2017
(04-13-2017, 09:50 PM)The Vision Wrote: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=6548
Submitting a Complicated Business for Group Bonus.
Participation bonus granted!
Sans: 765.08
Captain America: 248.66
Marcus Wright: 154.46
Frisk: 116.89
The Vision: 233.43
Hellboy: N/A. Switched characters.
Log updates pending.
Done - Spur
RE: Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic - Tearen Wover - 04-24-2017
My Underverse escape quest is ready for review.
RE: Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic - Jade Harley - 04-30-2017
(04-24-2017, 11:13 PM)Tearen Wover Wrote: My Underverse escape quest is ready for review.
Quest "Escape from Chaos" completed! Marvelous work, thank you for such an awesome story. If you have any questions about where to go from here, please make a new Help Desk discussion thread.
On top of that, I'd like to nominate Tearen's Underverse thread for an Exceptional writing bonus!
RE: Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic - Arle Nadja - 04-30-2017
Hello! I apologize if you're already aware of this, but I noticed that Warren snuck his post in just minutes before you finished writing one of your own and figured it might have gotten lost. I could certainly see myself losing a post because my brain assumes I've replied to anything above my last one. |D
http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=7840&pid=97780#pid97780
Regardless, I'd like to request a participation bonus for Warren and I in this thread?
RE: Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic - Beta Ray Bill - 04-30-2017
I would like a participation bonus for me and Luci completing this thread please? http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=7908&pid=98192#pid98192
RE: Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic - Ezrihel - 05-01-2017
(04-30-2017, 01:16 PM)Arle Nadja Wrote: Hello! I apologize if you're already aware of this, but I noticed that Warren snuck his post in just minutes before you finished writing one of your own and figured it might have gotten lost. I could certainly see myself losing a post because my brain assumes I've replied to anything above my last one. |D
http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=7840&pid=97780#pid97780
Regardless, I'd like to request a participation bonus for Warren and I in this thread?
Arle Nadja- 323 OM
Warren Zimmer- 282 OM
Donezo! -Amaterasu
(04-30-2017, 10:47 PM)Doctor Doom Wrote: I would like a participation bonus for me and Luci completing this thread please? http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=7908&pid=98192#pid98192
Doctor Doom- 127 OM
Luci- 263 OM
Updated! -Amaterasu
RE: Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic - Ezrihel - 05-01-2017
(04-30-2017, 01:05 PM)Jade Harley Wrote:(04-24-2017, 11:13 PM)Tearen Wover Wrote: My Underverse escape quest is ready for review.
Quest "Escape from Chaos" completed! Marvelous work, thank you for such an awesome story. If you have any questions about where to go from here, please make a new Help Desk discussion thread.
On top of that, I'd like to nominate Tearen's Underverse thread for an Exceptional writing bonus!
Gonna go ahead and calculate this for Jade:
Tearen Wover- 2628 OM (Exemplary)
(This was a wonderful read, Phh! Great job on it. I know it took a while, but it must have been a daunting goal to achieve!)
EDIT: Done! -Amaterasu.
RE: Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic - Beta Ray Bill - 05-05-2017
I would like a participation bonus for me and Koal completing this thread please? http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=7752
RE: Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic - The Vision - 05-07-2017
Group bonus for Dawn of Justice plox? http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=7925
RE: Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic - Ezrihel - 05-08-2017
(05-05-2017, 05:47 PM)Doctor Doom Wrote: I would like a participation bonus for me and Koal completing this thread please? http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=7752
Doctor Doom- 424 OM
Koal- 118 OM
(05-07-2017, 04:31 AM)The Vision Wrote: Group bonus for Dawn of Justice plox? http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=7925
Harry Potter- 90 OM
The Vision- 118 OM
Captain America- 52 OM
Quote:All bonuses in this post added, logs updated! - Jadedit
RE: Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic - Dawnika Snow - 05-08-2017
Link to topic - Amnesia
Quest, or Personal Storyline?
Participating characters: Dawnika Snow and Ballad
Total character count: Dawn - 17399, Ballad - 23964
Total word count: Dawn - 3132, Ballad - 4341
RE: Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic - Ezrihel - 05-08-2017
(05-08-2017, 11:46 AM)Dawnika Snow Wrote: Link to topic - Amnesia
Quest, or Personal Storyline?
Participating characters: Dawnika Snow and Ballad
Total character count: Dawn - 17399, Ballad - 23964
Total word count: Dawn - 3132, Ballad - 4341
Did you use wordcounter.net and make sure to take the formatting out? Because I'm getting ever so slightly different totals. 17,378(3,130 words) for Dawn and 23,840(4,340 words) for Ballad.
Dawnika Snow- 174 OM
Ballad- 239 OM
Quote:Logs updated! - Jadedit.
RE: Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic - Dawnika Snow - 05-08-2017
Link to topic: A Rough Return to the Waking World
Total character count including spaces: 34,650
Total word count: 5760
FOR PERSONAL STORYLINES: Great
Comment: Kelly is killin' it as always. Such intricate prose is nigh impossible to match. It's amazing that he can take 5000 words, slam them together and make it all about waking up. Every word is b-e-autifully designed. I also loved how much he built up his scenerio into Dark Data. Having built that up makes me wanna read his Dark Data stuff if I can find the time. You're doing awesome yo, but I'm still goin' for Ghidorah's neck boi.