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Re: Move Creation Workshop - PANDATRON - 10-27-2015
Gotcha, so I'll change it to this:
OVERLOAD - 300 OM
PANDATRON can overload his system, granting himself a "pool" of charge time he can use, allowing him to waive charge times from his other techniques. The use of this technique is instant, and he loses fatigue equal to a short sprint and sustains internal blunt damage as if he had received a strong punch in the gut. In exchange, he obtains 10 seconds of free "charge time" that he may use freely during the next minute. If he uses this move within 5 seconds of having used it already, he suffers double the consequences (and x3, x4, etc for further uses within 5 seconds of each other)
Re: Move Creation Workshop - Tom Marvolo Riddle - 10-27-2015
The first spell is partially built system wise on Enel's Lightning Storm move. The Killing Curse is well just your average T1 super. Though it will only kill if it actually ends up deciding the fight.
Hearthfire Charm [Ferventis Gelata]
Cost: 600 Om?
Requires: Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency
This spell once properly incanted allows the user to charge and release a fire-hydrant of burning, molten white magic that blazes in a churning spectrum of red. It seems to stick and splatter, and ignite anything it comes in contact with. The charge up on the spell ranges between its incantation time of one and a half seconds to a full minute to produce a proportionally more, spectacular, longer lasting, and potently dangerous effect.
At minimum charging duration this spell can be cast three times in a ten second period without exhausting a wand’s recharge rate.
The Cruciatus Curse [Crucio]
Cost: 300
Requires: Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency
Like most Dark Magic, this spell requires equally dark emotions to power it. With a relatively low charge time of three quarters of a second, this spell is a faint, translucent bolt of white or red lightning. Unlike most spells however, it requires the caster maintain the spell for as long as they desire to inflict debilitating pain on the target, and their wand must remain aimed at the target at all times. Those with equal or greater DEF to the spell's ATK have the potential to resist the paralysis enough to act.
May be cast or maintained once a second in ten second period without exhausting a wand’s recharge rate.
The Killing Curse [Avada Kedavra]
Cost: 600 or 900 Om?
Requires: Super Attack T1,Ranged Proficiency, Area of Attack Proficiency
Channeling a desire to see someone dead and feeling the rapture of Dark Magic, the caster unleashes bolt of deep emerald lightning in a straight line that releases molten motes of dripping light. Upon impact with a living organism to deals massive potentially lethal damage to the very life force of the target, but otherwise leaves no sign of its passing. If however it impacts on a non-living Mundane thing will be utterly destroyed as the spell continues forward in an attempt to end any life it can reach.
Re: Move Creation Workshop - Asriel Dreemurr - 10-27-2015
No one has responded to my Whirlpool topic. It's been a day.
Re: Move Creation Workshop - Illidan Stormrage - 10-28-2015
Ki Shield (Area Shield) (600) - Orion can manipulate his ki into a defensive plane, allowing it to absorb attacks directed at him. In the first instance, Orion can generate a curved shield that extends from his hands and covers his entire front, taking about two seconds to create. The oval shaped shield can absorb most non-Super attacks, and is especially good for blocking charged attacks.
In the second instance, Orion can create a shield that encases his entire body in a blue capsule of energy, blocking attacks from all sides. However, this form of the Ki Shield is for withstanding weaker attacks, and will break easier than the first type.
Re: Move Creation Workshop - Minato Namikaze - 10-28-2015
Tom Marvolo Riddle Wrote:The Cruciatus Curse [Crucio]
Cost: 300
Requires: Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency
Like most Dark Magic, this spell requires equally dark emotions to power it. With a relatively low charge time of three quarters of a second, this spell is a faint, translucent bolt of white or red lightning. Unlike most spells however, it requires the caster maintain the spell for as long as they desire to inflict debilitating pain on the target, and their wand must remain aimed at the target at all times. Those with equal to higher DEF to the spell's ATK have the potential to resist the paralysis enough to act, the higher the better.
May be cast or maintained once a second in ten second period without exhausting a wand’s recharge rate.
Everything was good, up until the bold part. Be more clear. Can you maintain it for 1 second every 10 seconds? or, can you maintain it for a full 10 seconds before needing to re-cast the spell?
Also, the charge time is a little short, I would just make it one second (the time it would take to say 'Crucio' without rushing the word).
Edit: I know that most spells will work if you rush the words, but still, a second seems more than fair.
Re: Move Creation Workshop - Tom Marvolo Riddle - 10-28-2015
Quote:The Cruciatus Curse [Crucio]Wordsmithed this slightly
Cost: 300
Requires: Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency
Like most Dark Magic, this spell requires equally dark emotions to power it. With a relatively low charge time of three quarters of a second, this spell is a faint, translucent bolt of white or red lightning. Unlike most spells however, it requires the caster maintain the spell for as long as they desire to inflict debilitating pain on the target, and their wand must remain aimed at the target at all times. Those with equal or greater DEF to the spell's ATK have the potential to resist the paralysis enough to act, the greater the more resistant.
And yeah my standard power taxation doesn't quite work with a cast and maintain spell
A. May be cast once a second in a ten second period and then may be maintained as long as the focus is maintained without exhausting a wand's recharge rate. (This was my intention, not sure how balanced it is though I can't cast any other spells while using it. And my character can only really be fixated on one target then.)
B. May be cast once a second and up to three times in a ten second period without exhausting a wand's recharge, and may be maintained for the for the remainder of said period. (Probably more balance)
I'm open to the power costs on it.
Re: Move Creation Workshop - Minato Namikaze - 10-28-2015
Tom Marvolo Riddle Wrote:Quote:The Cruciatus Curse [Crucio]Wordsmithed this slightly
Cost: 300
Requires: Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency
Like most Dark Magic, this spell requires equally dark emotions to power it. With a relatively low charge time of three quarters of a second, this spell is a faint, translucent bolt of white or red lightning. Unlike most spells however, it requires the caster maintain the spell for as long as they desire to inflict debilitating pain on the target, and their wand must remain aimed at the target at all times. Those with equal or greater DEF to the spell's ATK have the potential to resist the paralysis enough to act, the greater the more resistant.
And yeah my standard power taxation doesn't quite work with a cast and maintain spell
A. May be cast once a second in a ten second period and then may be maintained as long as the focus is maintained without exhausting a wand's recharge rate. (This was my intention, not sure how balanced it is though I can't cast any other spells while using it. And my character can only really be fixated on one target then.)
B. May be cast once a second and up to three times in a ten second period without exhausting a wand's recharge, and may be maintained for the for the remainder of said period. (Probably more balance)
I'm open to the power costs on it.
Okay, just throw away the parts about how often it can be cast without exhausting your wand, that part with the wand pretty much just translates to how often a move can be used before it starts taking a real toll on the character itself (If you start spamming spells without showing fatigue on Tom, I will make you edit your posts
). Just tell me how long it can be maintained for.
example: The effect can be maintained for a max of 10 seconds. This maintained time will get shorter and shorter as an opponents DEF stat gets closer to Tom's ATK stat and, if an opponents DEF stat is double Tom's ATK, will become almost useless.
Note: I say almost useless as this still gives you some room for it to effect people for a second or two before they resist it. And you'd still need to be aiming the Wand directly at his opponents for the effect to continue.
Also: Like I said, change that 'Three quarters of a second' Charge time to 1 second (3/4's of a second charge time is just weird XD)
Re: Move Creation Workshop - Asriel Dreemurr - 10-28-2015
Now it's been two days.
Re: Move Creation Workshop - Zalgo - 10-28-2015
Sackboy Wrote:Now it's been two days.It may be advisable for you to repost your move, to make it easier for people to find and read it, thus increase your chances of getting a review.
Re: Move Creation Workshop - Minato Namikaze - 10-28-2015
Sackboy Wrote:I want to send in an NPC named Whirlpool. Here are all of his moves.
Tail Whip (requires Ranged Proficiency and Physical Strength) (600)
SeaWing tails are dangerous weapons that can be used in melee combat, and creating huge waves that can travel to 10 feet.
Bioluminescence (0) (fodder)
SeaWings have patches all over their body that light up at their whim. Useful for helping Primes and Secondaries without Enhanced Senses.
Talons (300) (requires Physical Strength)
Whirlpool uses his talons to claw at his foe. If they hit someone with DEF 3 or lower, they have the same force as a blow with a sword. If they hit someone with DEF 4 or lower, they only leave minor scratches.
Underwater Survival (0) (fodder)
Whirlpool uses the gills on his neck to breathe underwater. He cannot talk underwater unless he uses the bioluminescent language which is like Morse Code: Aquatic. Unfortunatly, no one knows Aquatic in the Omniverse. It takes five years to learn.
Don't need to address the fodder stuff
Tail Whip - how long is the tail? How large are the waves it can produce? How far can the waves travel?
Talons - Unfortunately, specifying effects based on stats doesn't work like that. Your talons, as a move, would do more or less damage the higher/ lower a person's DEF stat is. if it's 1, the talons will do more damage than if their defense is 2.
How large are the talons? what do they look like?
Re: Move Creation Workshop - Tom Marvolo Riddle - 10-28-2015
Minato Namikaze Wrote:Tom Marvolo Riddle Wrote:Quote:The Cruciatus Curse [Crucio]Wordsmithed this slightly
Cost: 300
Requires: Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency
Like most Dark Magic, this spell requires equally dark emotions to power it. With a relatively low charge time of three quarters of a second, this spell is a faint, translucent bolt of white or red lightning. Unlike most spells however, it requires the caster maintain the spell for as long as they desire to inflict debilitating pain on the target, and their wand must remain aimed at the target at all times. Those with equal or greater DEF to the spell's ATK have the potential to resist the paralysis enough to act, the greater the more resistant.
And yeah my standard power taxation doesn't quite work with a cast and maintain spell
A. May be cast once a second in a ten second period and then may be maintained as long as the focus is maintained without exhausting a wand's recharge rate. (This was my intention, not sure how balanced it is though I can't cast any other spells while using it. And my character can only really be fixated on one target then.)
B. May be cast once a second and up to three times in a ten second period without exhausting a wand's recharge, and may be maintained for the for the remainder of said period. (Probably more balance)
I'm open to the power costs on it.
Okay, just throw away the parts about how often it can be cast without exhausting your wand, that part with the wand pretty much just translates to how often a move can be used before it starts taking a real toll on the character itself (If you start spamming spells without showing fatigue on Tom, I will make you edit your posts
Just tell me how long it can be maintained for.
example: The effect can be maintained for a max of 10 seconds. This maintained time will get shorter and shorter as an opponents DEF stat gets closer to Tom's ATK stat and, if an opponents DEF stat is double Tom's ATK, will become almost useless.
Note: I say almost useless as this still gives you some room for it to effect people for a second or two before they resist it. And you'd still need to be aiming the Wand directly at his opponents for the effect to continue.
Also: Like I said, change that 'Three quarters of a second' Charge time to 1 second (3/4's of a second charge time is just weird XD)
Roger that, and question is ten seconds fair amount of time for stasis move? Short or Long?
And the wand being aimed will always be true. I swear on left arm that I did change it at one point to a second, I have no clue what happened to the change after that.
The Cruciatus Curse [Crucio]
Cost: 300
Requires: Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency
Like most Dark Magic, this spell requires equally dark emotions to power it. With a relatively low charge time of a second, this spell is a faint, translucent bolt of white or red lightning. Unlike most spells however, it requires the caster maintain the spell for as long as they desire to inflict debilitating pain on the target, and their wand must remain aimed at the target at all times. Those with equal or greater DEF to the spell's ATK have the potential to resist the paralysis enough to act via the shortening the time it may be effectively used equal up to double DEF of the ATK for only split seconds of effect at best. Conversely the opposite is true of those of lower DEF.
May be cast once a second, and has baseline duration of up to ten seconds that it can be maintained.
Re: Move Creation Workshop - Zalgo - 10-28-2015
Tom Marvolo Riddle Wrote:The Cruciatus Curse [Crucio]
Cost: 300
Requires: Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency
Like most Dark Magic, this spell requires equally dark emotions to power it. With a relatively low charge time of a second, this spell is a faint, translucent bolt of white or red lightning. Unlike most spells however, it requires the caster maintain the spell for as long as they desire to inflict debilitating pain on the target, and their wand must remain aimed at the target at all times. Those with equal or greater DEF to the spell's ATK have the potential to resist the paralysis enough to act via the shortening the time it may be effectively used equal up to double DEF of the ATK for only split seconds of effect at best. Conversely the opposite is true of those of lower DEF.
May be cast once a second, and has baseline duration of up to ten seconds that it can be maintained.
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Quote:Chains of the Heavens
Gilgamesh stops all of his attacks and opens portals to his treasuries around the target. After a second chains fly out of the portals and bind to the targets limbs, waist, and neck inhibiting movement and the use of weapons. These chains are extremely difficult to break and bind to their target for thirty seconds. Gil cannot use any of his abilities nor move until the chains land or he retracts it. The more the target struggles the more fatigued Gil gets and this can only be used once per battle.
The effects are very similar, and you both have the same charge time, but he has 2 SPD, and you 1 SPD. Maybe you should have 2 seconds charge time instead, to account for that.
Re: Move Creation Workshop - The Rogue - 10-28-2015
Lycöan: ?00
Requires Ranged Profinciency, ???
This gun has a special place in Connor's heart, for he made this gun on his own.
Specs:
Length: 6-inch (152 mm) barrel/ 10.75 inches (27.3 cm) ((from the back of the slide to the bore))
Height: 6.25 inches (15.9 cm)
Width: 1.25 inches (32 mm)
Magazine Compacity: 9 rounds
Caliber/Bore diameter: .429 inches (10.9 mm)
Ammo types
- Super-sonic: Goes above the speed of sound, trading quietness for more damage. Shatters if it hits water.
- Sub-sonic: Goes bellow the speed of sound, trading damage for quietness.
- Explosive: Is a super-sonic that explodes on contact. The explosion is relatively small, used for lightly armored foes.
He even made a custom attachment that he rarely takes off. He based it off of military rail gun technology. He called it the Electromagnetic Coil Chamber., or ECC. Once turned on a high pitched 'whine' can be heard on the very edge of normal human hearing. When a bullet is fired the ECC 'pulls' the bullet along, making it go faster. Thus a Super-sonic turns into a Magnum bullet, sub-sonic turns into a Super-sonic and explosive rounds explode in the chamber, so they are not usable. When the ECC is turned off it also doubles as a suspresser, so a Super-sonic rounds sound like a normal sub-sonic bullet, a sub-sonic is just a stacatto cough.
The ECC also adds 6 inches to the overall length.
*Note: I might have the ECC turned on or Explosive rounds as a super move
Re: Move Creation Workshop - Zalgo - 10-28-2015
Connor Hound Wrote:Range: An unmoving target at 15ft is a guaranteed hit.
I don't think the use of the term "guaranteed" is appropriate. It's pretty absolute, and unless the technique is homing, I believe that it is out of place. I suggest putting "nearly guaranteed" instead, to also account for that each bullet has different flight-speeds and an explicit chance to actually evade it.
Re: Move Creation Workshop - The Rogue - 10-28-2015
Normal physics says that speed doesn't determine range, but yeah we're not using that, so yeah thank you!
Re: Move Creation Workshop - The Rogue - 10-28-2015
Connor Hound Wrote:Lycöan: ?00
Requires Ranged Profinciency, ???
This gun has a special place in Connor's heart, for he made this gun on his own.
Specs:
Length: 6-inch (152 mm) barrel/ 10.75 inches (27.3 cm) ((from the back of the slide to the bore))
Height: 6.25 inches (15.9 cm)
Width: 1.25 inches (32 mm)
Magazine Compacity: 9 rounds
Caliber/Bore diameter: .429 inches (10.9 mm)
Ammo types
Range: An unmoving target at 15ft is normally a guaranteed hit
- Super-sonic: Goes above the speed of sound, trading quietness for more damage. Shatters if it hits water.
- Sub-sonic: Goes bellow the speed of sound, trading damage for quietness.
- Explosive: Is a super-sonic that explodes on contact. The explosion is relatively small, used for lightly armored foes.
He even made a custom attachment that he rarely takes off. He based it off of military rail gun technology. He called it the Electromagnetic Coil Chamber., or ECC. Once turned on a high pitched 'whine' can be heard on the very edge of normal human hearing. When a bullet is fired the ECC 'pulls' the bullet along, making it go faster. Thus a Super-sonic turns into a Magnum bullet, sub-sonic turns into a Super-sonic and explosive rounds explode in the chamber, so they are not usable. When the ECC is turned off it also doubles as a suspresser, so a Super-sonic rounds sound like a normal sub-sonic bullet, a sub-sonic is just a stacatto cough.
The ECC also adds 6 inches to the overall length.
*Note: I might have the ECC turned on or Explosive rounds as a super move
Is that good? And should I set the price as?
Re: Move Creation Workshop - Zalgo - 10-28-2015
Connor Hound Wrote:Normal physics says that speed doesn't determine range
Correct, but you included the chance to hit (a guaranteed hit in this case, auto-hitting) within the "range" category, which contained the issue I was addressing.
Additionally, "normal" physics don't always apply. Omniphysics take precedence, for the sake of balance, and I believe that the move is unbalanced, as I have justified.
Edit: Aaaand you editted your post. With a correction, so all good.
Re: Move Creation Workshop - The Rogue - 10-28-2015
Okay
Re: Move Creation Workshop - Shade - 10-28-2015
Move idea for a potential alt switch. The slash are to indicated both versions of the move. the first one i would buy and then it's upgrade. they would be the same principle but different numbers.
Quote:DigiFuse x4/x8 (Requires Symbiosis, Fusion: Advanced/Master) - 300 OM
Like any Fusion Loader, Shoutmon can use his Darkness Loader to fuse himself with up to 3/7 others to increase his strength. These 3/7 others do not need to have any Fusion power to be included in the Fusion, although the more advanced they are in the technique, the harder it is for Shoutmon to dominate the fusion with his will. (This part is mostly RP Fodder.)
And of course the obligatory force-able Fusion.
Quote:Darkness DigiFuse (Requires Symbiosis, DigiFuse x4/x8) - 300 OM
Unlike other Fusion Loaders, a Darkness Loader allows the user to freely disregard to consent of another in favor of it's user. Shoutmon can use his Darkness Loader to force others to fuse with him. This Fusion has double to SP cost to maintain, 2 SP per post and 4 per round, and each additional partner past the first adds 1 SP per post to that maintenance total. Shoutmon can Darkness Digifuse with up to 3/7 partners. (This is dependent on the current max of DigiFuse x4 or x8.) Also, upon ending the Fusion, Shoutmon retains any and all damage sustained while fused.
The Darkness Loader has power over the Fusion of other as well.
Quote:Darkness Disengage Fuse (Requires Debuff Prof., Symbiosis, Basic Fusion) - Tier 1 Super Move - 600 OM
Another perk of the Darkness Loader is that i can force others to DeFuse. Shoutmon can use his Darkness Loader to force one target Fusion, and make the involved parties unfuse, and stay that way for the next Round.
Re: Move Creation Workshop - Demetri Malius - 10-28-2015
Pickpocket(900[melee, ranged, defense], requires Physical Strength, Ranged, Debuff)
Demetri is able to steal weapons off of unsuspecting enemies and store them in one of his ten pockets on his leather cuirass. In order to use the weapon or defense, Demetri needs to have any and all proficients required for the item, but if not then he can only use the item as a simple projectile. Any items that Demetri steals and uses lose some of their their power and durability, meaning that they are only useful for a few uses, depending on the item. Once fully used, they shatter and reform in the hands of whoever the item was taken from. These can vary widely from swords, to guns, and shields, but only applies to physical items. For example, Demetri can't take a fireball, because its made from the user, and not something that you can just hold and save for later. However, he can take a sword and use it to slice an enemy or parry an attack. Every item he carries gradually slows him down, with a weapon being heavier the more powerful it is. However, this cannot be done in the middle of a fight, in which Demetri must make do with his current arsenal. Does not apply to super moves.
Possible addition: Ability to grasp projectiles from the air and store in satchel?
Final edits: gonna probably have it go to approval after this.
Base ideas for the following, need some work:
Thief's Satchel [Steal](Tier 1 Defensive- 600 Area Shield)
Demetri can have his satchel expand and swallow the power from a super move. It takes five seconds for the satchel to conform to its maximum capacity, and once the power had been absorbed, retreats back to normal size, glowing with power.
Thief's Satchel[Unleash](Tier 2 Offensive, 800)
Demetri must have used [Steal] in order to gain power before using this supermove. Demetri combines his chains, giving him a 50m range, as he charges his combined chain with the absorbed energy from his enemy's attack. After charging for ten seconds, he shoots out a chain with 1 inch thick metal links and 5 inch blade to his opponent, capable of piercing strong opponents.